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Created: 06/02 2008
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The Hater

 

    The haters eyes are green

    with envy, they wish they

    could, and yet they can't.

    All they know to do is rave

    and rant. A heart filled with

    anger, a mind full of hate,

   and caused only by a person

   who they can't admit they

   appreciate. They only wait for

  for the person they hate to fail,

  but instead their hate only

  motivates and this person

  excels. Why hate when usually

 this ends in someones heart filled

 with tragic pain. The one hated on looks

 back at this hater with a look of shame.

 So again why hate if there is not

 anything positive to gain?

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On June 4th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said: 
sixtiesdoll It's really good for your first poem. It's pretty good despite that actually. I love it. The message gives something to everyone. :)
On June 3rd 2008 kissofasia Said: 
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i like it.......good job.kmp
On June 2nd 2008 deadpoet Said: 
deadpoet good message...pretty good poem
On June 2nd 2008 lardpiles Said: 
lardpiles niceeeee
On June 2nd 2008 XxCloudyEyesxX Said: 
XxCloudyEyesxX it makes a great point, i love it!!
On June 2nd 2008 moosegurl01 Said: 
moosegurl01 only problem is I said for twice in the middle..I am my on worst critic though
On June 2nd 2008 xHickChick789x Said: 
xHickChick789x wow this is very deep and emotional. :) Great work!