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Created:
06/02 2008
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293
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My Poems
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The Hater |
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Testriffic |
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Boredness |
The Hater
The haters eyes are green
with envy, they wish they
could, and yet they can't.
All they know to do is rave
and rant. A heart filled with
anger, a mind full of hate,
and caused only by a person
who they can't admit they
appreciate. They only wait for
for the person they hate to fail,
but instead their hate only
motivates and this person
excels. Why hate when usually
this ends in someones heart filled
with tragic pain. The one hated on looks
back at this hater with a look of shame.
So again why hate if there is not
anything positive to gain?
| On June 4th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said: |
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| It's really good for your first poem. It's pretty good despite that actually. I love it. The message gives something to everyone. :) |
| On June 3rd 2008 kissofasia Said: |
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| i like it.......good job.kmp |
| On June 2nd 2008 deadpoet Said: |
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| good message...pretty good poem |
| On June 2nd 2008 lardpiles Said: |
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| niceeeee |
| On June 2nd 2008 XxCloudyEyesxX Said: |
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| it makes a great point, i love it!! |
| On June 2nd 2008 moosegurl01 Said: |
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| only problem is I said for twice in the middle..I am my on worst critic though |
| On June 2nd 2008 xHickChick789x Said: |
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| wow this is very deep and emotional. :) Great work! |


