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This is my first poem so be gentle

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Created: 07/18 2007
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I MISS

I MISS

 

I miss the days of yesterday.

When you always knew just what to say.

I miss how you would hold me tight.

When you always made my life so bright.

I miss how you thought I was the best.

When your love was true nothing less.

I miss how you would watch me sleep.

When our love was a love to keep.

I miss how you lifted me so high.

When you would make me fill like I could fly.

I miss the way you made me fill.

When it seemed the world stood still.

I miss the way you wanted me near.

When you shouted you loved me for all to hear.

I miss the way you stood up for me.

When your love the whole world could see.

Then I woke up and nothing was the same.

Everything lost Am I to blame
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On February 26th 2008 mcihellejane Said: 
mcihellejane I just happened to come across this poem in my wandering around the site-I liked it. It has a nice even flow and sounds great!!
On December 11th 2007 EvilRaven9892 Said: 
EvilRaven9892 oh that is wow, i love it. it has a nice flow!
On September 5th 2007 chicawhatwhatb Said: 
chicawhatwhatb great poem, easy to relate to!
On July 30th 2007 wannabetimthe1 Said: 
wannabetimthe1 great poem......i love it
On July 25th 2007 hardcorpschick Said: 
hardcorpschick sorry. thats very sad. but a nice poem
On July 22nd 2007 danielleinmy Said: 
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great poem love it
On July 19th 2007 bad123ass Said: 
bad123ass this is really good,you should write more
On July 18th 2007 nick12477 Said: 
nick12477 that is so true, it is really good, and 1st poem, wow...i hope u write more
On July 18th 2007 jessicawieberg Said: 
jessicawieberg Tjis is really good for your first poem... keep up the good work.
On July 18th 2007 BlueShadow Said: 
BlueShadow love it, i know what it is like to lose who i loved
On July 18th 2007 chickenbroth Said: 
chickenbroth This is very powerful, and sad. Beautifuly sad.
On July 18th 2007 Jeff1315 Said: 
Jeff1315 Just remove a few spelling errors and it would be absolutely perfect, i loved it =]
On July 18th 2007 sophgurl15 Said: 
sophgurl15 this is really good better then anything i could write. lol
On July 18th 2007 stabme3 Said: 
stabme3 This is awesome. your poem is great. i hope you'll write more.
On July 18th 2007 dizzycatt Said: 
dizzycatt besides a few spelling errors, this is really good. kudos =]
On July 18th 2007 tswieberg Said: 
tswieberg This is a really great poem. I think you have hit on a feeling that everyone can relate too. Good job.
On July 18th 2007 101091 Said: 
101091 I really like it. Theres a few spelling errors but it's still a great poem.
On July 18th 2007 njoymoo1 Said: 
njoymoo1 I like it, I can relate to everyone of those lines.