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This is what you want for me..........Rate this Poem
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Created:
10/01 2008
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Somebody(Newest Poem)
Wish me luck on future poems. This is not what I originally was going to post. Somebody But this is what you want for me. When your use to being a nobody. But this is what you want for me. I don’t deserve the fame I receive. But this is what you want for me. You keep pushing my boundaries. But this is what you want for me. I want to keep posting insistently. But this is what you want for me. It makes me feel incredibly happy. But this is what you want for me.
Please Login to post comments| On June 23rd 2009 sixtiespixie Said: |
| It is kinda abstract and personal. I feel the same way in a sense. |
| On February 21st 2009 elvira2196 Said: |
| GREAT JOB!!! |
| On October 9th 2008 chickenbroth Said: |
| good job. |
| On October 9th 2008 stef4732 Said: |
| awhh love it |
| On October 3rd 2008 ausjo Said: |
| Like the flow. Nice one. |
| On October 3rd 2008 Thuggishone Said: |
| Great work. |
| On October 2nd 2008 amychristian77 Said: |
| This is really insightful! i know what its like to feel like a nobody, but there is always someone pushing you, saying not to be a nobody! for me, this is usually God. :)To be pulled out of your comfort zone, to take a leap of faith can be really hard...but its what they want for you...
I hope im on the right track! lol oh well that's how i interpreted it! :) |
| On October 2nd 2008 tiffany1058 Said: |
| WOW!!!! i really like this one i can really relate and this poem kinda just rolls off the tounge |
| On October 2nd 2008 max5892 Said: |
| haha u deserve every vote and every compliment you've ever gotten lol...(at least from meeee :D) |
| On October 2nd 2008 MCRsLover Said: |
| awesome |
| On October 2nd 2008 justjetjustis Said: |
| wowwwwwwwwww |
| On October 1st 2008 TheKTGirl Said: |
| Sorry, I can't help but add a lil' bit of critique... but the "your" you are referring to in the first line (stanza? :) that's the contraction for "you are" so, grammatically speaking, it's "you're". Sorry for getting technical and stuff, but I barely ever get to do that without offended people; and I don't ever really critique you or anything so I thought "Hey, why not take advantage now?" LOL :D |
| On October 1st 2008 TheKTGirl Said: |
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| It's cool. Good job :) |
| On October 1st 2008 doodle2442spaz Said: |
| I Iike it a lot!!!! I will subscribe |
| On October 1st 2008 xHickChick789x Said: |
| Ooah. Very appealing. Me likes. Another great poem added to your wonderful collection I love so much! :) Keep it up Lizzy! |
| On October 1st 2008 Thugnastay227 Said: |
| hmmmm very abstract. and different. i do like. |
| On October 1st 2008 justjetjustis Said: |
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| wowwwwwwwwwwwwww |
| On October 1st 2008 LeahLive Said: |
| I don't believe in luck but you have my blessings! I like the reptitiveness. Easy to relate, a whole lot of truth. Good write, I'd say! |
