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My Mind Wonders |
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And Then |
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Untitled |
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You |
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Hide |
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Revenge |
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When I'm In Love With You |
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The Taste Of Pure Sweet Poison |
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Intentions (Newest Poem) |
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Untitled (Newest Poem) |
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Whisper |
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Burning Memories Ashes |
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Untitled |
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*Mini Poem* |
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*Mini Poem 2* |
♥ Searching For Perfection ♥
Muse’s writing Dash’s writing I'm off to find the perfect man.
One who will listen and understand.
He would take my very breath away.
Anytime I see his perfect face
& the invigorating way he says my name
Gives me the strength to make it through the day
He makes me feel like a beautiful painting.
In my heart I will always be waiting.
I'll always know that he'll stay true.
He loves me for who I am and so much more
He knows my insecurities and asks what they are for
He can melt away any fear with an "I love you."
He touches my cheek it makes me weak.
He knows all the words I’m about to speak.
He is perfect no doubt in my mind.
He fears the moments when we are apart
And each second away makes a stronger heart
His love will last longer than time
Our love continues to grow everyday He lets me know in sweet little ways He is my ideal man to his faults I am blind
I would do anything for him, at any time, for any reason
Anything my love says, I will believe him
I’m so in love and he is mine
Please Login to post comments| On June 22nd 2009 sixtiespixie Said: |
| You guys did awesome. |
| On March 21st 2009 PeyJonique Said: |
| This poem is amazing i love it you took all your feelings and worded it perfect your very talented |
| On March 4th 2009 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said: |
| Aww, I love this poem. :) It's really amazing. |
| On February 6th 2009 TheKTGirl Said: |
| Aw that's so cool =) and you guys collaborated on it? Dang, awesome job!! =D oh, and I absolutely love the layout, too!! |
| On January 6th 2009 tiffany1058 Said: |
| this is amazing i love how you can take words and make them seem like ive never heard em before. you are very talented
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| On January 5th 2009 MCRsLover Said: |
| That was beyond amazing, musey! |
| On December 26th 2008 xHickChick789x Said: |
| oh wow. This is so... wow. I love it! It's a wonderful colaboration! haha Nice job! :D |
| On December 23rd 2008 Thuggishone Said: |
| I think it came together pretty while considering you two were looking at things from your own point of veiws...very good...if you want to do one with someone else maybe a guy poet hit me up with some Ideals and we can make it happen...william |
| On December 22nd 2008 breepers Said: |
| loved it! |
| On December 22nd 2008 search4me Said: |
| A good poem. There were some very suble and clever rhymes in there. Different, but good. |
| On December 21st 2008 DarkSide1477 Said: |
| maybe its the whole not being alive thing but i think the dead poet is missing the greatness of this poem becuz it dsnt have sum strict pattern and is a blending of two great peots, yes its not seamlessly fused but that would ruin the point if it was, its a beautiful poem by two people that keeps its meaning while showing the differnce between two poets and how they write, amazing job both of u |
| On December 21st 2008 max5892 Said: |
| ooooo THIS is my favorite of yours. and i guess i give credit to dash too. two great poets fuse into one with absolutely great effect!!!!! i love it! it seems like it'd be a great song! someone should record it =P |
| On December 21st 2008 EvilRaven9892 Said: |
| o wow that's really intersting |
| On December 21st 2008 deadpoet Said: |
| this was written in a very different way, not too fond of it but i like the fact that it is different, the poem in general was great just the rhyme rhyme dont rhyme rhyme rhyme (rhyme with last dont rhyme) didnt fit to me |
| On December 20th 2008 FireAngel420 Said: |
| I love the way this was written it was different great job |
| On December 20th 2008 DashboardLogic Said: |
| :O!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ...whaaaaaa?!?!!? *cries* |
| On December 20th 2008 muse4apoem Said: |
| hun it me and dash lol |
| On December 20th 2008 Yanks19 Said: |
| great poem miss muse :) you and deadpoet must be the beeest |
