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The first time I thought I loved...

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Created: 07/29 2007
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Category: Love

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Altered Heaven

His eyes are like fire that burns straight through my heart.

His words are like bullets that tear my world apart.

The way that he treats me-no one could compare;

My life is an empty hole when he's not there.

But being around him hurts me,

More than he will ever know.

His love is like rain-my heard is like snow.

The way the candlelight hit him-

It caught me by surprise.

I thought I saw heaven when I looked in his eyes.

But I must continue on like the above wasn't said

I'm not really that lucky, for my heart he has bled.

So the next time I see him, I'll look him in the eye;

Smile like nothing is wrong, and try not to cry.

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On September 12th 2007 alexia66 Said: 
alexia66 wow i love this one, good flow and feeling to it.