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She stares at the blood, her heart torn.Rate this Poem
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My Poems
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Count Till Ten |
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The One Broken Heart No One Can See. |
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In this room, there lies a girl.. |
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All This Hurt. |
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Heart on my Sleeve. |
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Drunken Love |
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His fist, Her face. |
In this room, there lies a girl..
In this room, there lies this girl
All broken and alone
A razor to her wrist
Letting out a small moan.
She stares at the blood
Her heart torn
At times she wishes
She were never born.
As the life drains, she wonders
How could you do this to me?
Thinking back on the memories
Just how much in love we used to be.
With the slightest bit of an idea
She takes a finger and dips it into the puddle of blood.
Writing on the wall; do you love me now?
Her tears becoming a flood.
Her phone rings
Playing their song
She shakes her head
This is where I belong.
Slowly slipping
Into the darkness ahead
I love you
Was what she last said.
Her boyfriend driving
The roads are wet
He recalls on what happened
When they last met.
He was kissing another girl
She walked in
Gazing upon the sight saying
Just how long has it been?
Making up lies he told her
He had simply lost his place
That he had
Fallen from his grace
Driving to her home
To make things right
He would never forgive himself
If anything happened to her that night.
Arriving there; jumping out of the car
Shouting and yelling calling her name
Racing into the room; his eyes feasting upon a sight
Tears were falling and his head was hung in shame.
What have I done?"
Picking up the razor; holding it to his wrist
With a slow cutting motion
Everything becomes a mist
Glancing at what was written on the wall
Taking his own blood; death letting out its laugh
Scrawling next to her words
"Sweetie, I always have."
| On November 30th 2009 drhs2012 Said: |
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| Wow simply amazing! |
| On July 7th 2008 cookiesweet33 Said: |
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| Wow..just wow. Your amazing! |
| On February 20th 2008 JanusFacedLiar Said: |
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| Very Romeo and Juliet.Amazing. |
| On January 20th 2008 bloodyness6969 Said: |
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| i wrote a poem like this once.. it was sad
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| On December 31st 2007 tillymaymopop Said: |
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| you are the best freaking poem writer i've seen in a while |
| On December 23rd 2007 jennaferz Said: |
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| wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.
seriously, nothing else comes to mind. just WOW. |
| On November 15th 2007 veronicavanity Said: |
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| Wow,
emotastic much?!
But I love it anyway. |
| On November 14th 2007 MarieInSpace Said: |
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| SHEENA is deepppppp. |
| On November 7th 2007 heartzcanbleed Said: |
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| WOW! thats good S! |
| On November 3rd 2007 justanothagurl Said: |
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| Love It!!! |
| On November 1st 2007 sabrina225 Said: |
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| SPEECHLESS I LOVE IT...YOUR A VERY GOOD DEEP WRITER AND WELL YOUR WORDS JUST FLOW SO BRILLENTLY....I LOVE THIS POEM THE MOST |
| On October 11th 2007 zomgitzwendyxD Said: |
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| wow this is a wonderful poem :)
its very nice :] |
| On October 7th 2007 comacozi101 Said: |
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| love it, ur best work yet |
| On October 6th 2007 omfg010203 Said: |
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| omfg!! ok..me=crying!!!! soo not kewl! |
| On October 6th 2007 stics917 Said: |
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| sad but i like it |
| On October 6th 2007 X4packchickX Said: |
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| that is so sad!!!! But it was gooooodd!!! I luv it! :') |
| On October 5th 2007 necrosiss Said: |
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| I forgot to change the 'Anger', hehe, in a rush. Sorry. |


