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Yeah. Doesn't make sense.

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Created: 05/11 2008
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Category: Anger

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I don't belong here.

There are times.

I get angry at you.

I can't explain myself.

What do you want from me?! 

I'm not perfect. I don't want to be!

There are times.

You get me mad. You get me sad!

All of these emotions, and I cannot explain not one.

You confuse me. What is it that you do to make my mind scrambled?

YOU CONFUSE ME AND AMUSE ME.

I hate you! I love you.

You don't make any sense, neither do I. Stop talking, I love your voice. It's sweet and musical, and I can't resist it.

GET AWAY! Come closer.

You destroy me. You complete me.

Leave me! Come back. I need you to be here everyday.

And I need to you go far away, as close as possible.

Best friend?

Always. 

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On November 4th 2008 individulsong Said: 
individulsong :) I know exactly what you're talking about. This was wonderful. I like your matter of fact tone. It's like YOU are talking to me, and I'm not reading it off of a flat computer screen with a gray and white cat sucking on my blanket because he's trying to get my attention while I'm drinking a cup of bitter black coffee. Yep yep :D
On October 7th 2008 speederspider Said: 
speederspider haha! Yes I know! god I know. Yet you say it so simple and sweet..."You destroy me. You complete me" ain't that the truth. I love you work:) And I love you:)
On May 17th 2008 bigearringsgir Said: 
bigearringsgir Aw man - I've felt like that b4 2
On May 15th 2008 kissofasia Said: 
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hey wow,i feel the same way too sometimes with my husband.It's nice to love and be loved and sometimes fight too.lol
On May 13th 2008 StarGoddess219 Said: 
StarGoddess219 This is really good, you got talent. : )
On May 12th 2008 madmarcus Said: 
madmarcus Such ambivivalence...Caught in the ebb and flow of a coquette are we? Its like darkness at the bottom of the ocean...can't find what direction is up and that knowledge would be very conducive to survival. Oh yeah and nice work. Ill be back to check it out again.
On May 11th 2008 Babydotz Said: 
Babydotz Aw lol this makes me smile. Very good poem...
On May 11th 2008 wowjessiie Said: 
wowjessiie i love your work, im so glad were married :)
On May 11th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said: 
Thugnastay227 ummm wow....i've read alot of poems....and this is one of nay prolly the only poem i've read that has brouhgt me close to tears....very close ineed. i love it powerful and raw...and u may not want to be perfect but guess what? u are. acceptance of imperfections makes one perfect. Huggles.
On May 11th 2008 Sloanly Said: 
Sloanly As much as shouldn't make sense it makes perfect sense. :)
On May 11th 2008 Chula252 Said: 
Chula252 WOW mami I love this its ....... amazing ... I'm overwhelmed by the paradox truth in it. Very potent I adore it!!!!!!
On May 11th 2008 poetryislife13 Said: 
poetryislife13 Wow i really like this!! its deep!! will you comment on some of mine??