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(idk what it is.making it on the spot)

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Created: 05/12 2008
Views: 268
Category: Worry

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There are times.
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On The Spot..
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I don't belong here.

On The Spot..

 I open my eyes, and see the morning light.

Here I am. 

On the spot..

Forced to give out my best.

With words unspoken, I can tell you a story.

Look in my eyes, and see the depth within.

I need someone to save me,

I'm drowning in the sea of angst.

Don't change my words to support your own sexual needs.

Yo no estoy jugando contigo.

I am not playing with you.

Y tu espera un reaccion de mi..

And you expect a reaction from me.

Como si yo deber de decir algo.

Like I'm gonna say something,

Lo que nunca va a recibir.

Which you're never gonna get.

Here's a poem :

Feelings change, but I never will.

Like the currents in the sea, you push and you pull me.

Uncharted waters,

Discovering new emotions.

This may sound corny but :

My heart is a ship.

And you are the captain.

BLEH. Weell...

I'm tired of you.

And your consistency in inconsistency.

I shut my eyes, and close them tight.

And hope to get some sleep at night.

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On November 4th 2008 individulsong Said: 
individulsong Girl, you write so real.
On October 7th 2008 speederspider Said: 
speederspider Wow I can feel this poem and completely understand especially the spanish parts. Gosh those captains suck sometimes. I was gonna write a poem very much like this about being "the putty, the wax, completely mallible" only by the very one and only...and yet, they are uninterested. It makes you feel unloved, unappreciated, and pitiful. People should be nicer.
On May 19th 2008 Sloanly Said: 
Sloanly i loved it! :D
On May 17th 2008 FallonsPhotos Said: 
FallonsPhotos Wonderful poem!
On May 15th 2008 kissofasia Said: 
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I want you to know im so moved by this poem.very nice.
On May 13th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said: 
Thugnastay227 this is how i described erica...i would say you're (meaning her) was consistantly inconsistant...it's like u somehow had records of my aim away messages. lol this was original and great...and proves how good of a poet u are. I bow in the presence of greatness and dare not to look in ur eyes. i'm just not worthy.
On May 12th 2008 Chula252 Said: 
Chula252 WOW I have been having so many issues lately with people taking my words out of context, assuming the right to a assume how, who, and what I am, simply to suite their own purposes and needs ... this just reconfirms so much of how I have been feeling of late. You are awesome I am so glad you have found an outlet through written expression. Another powerful write!!!
On May 12th 2008 october1015 Said: 
october1015 Haha, I put the meaning beneath it..
On May 12th 2008 deadpoet Said: 
deadpoet yikes...too bad i dont know that much spanish, but this was good (what i could read lol)