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Created:
05/04 2007
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137
Category:
Anger
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no one knows, no one cares |
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no one knows, no one cares
I sit a lone in the dark, but no one knows no one cares.
A tear falls on my chin, but still, no one knows no one cares.
I wish I could vanish in the air, no one would miss me.
I wish I could just fade away, cause no one would care.
| On May 19th 2007 PoeticPang Said: |
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| awwwww,,, it's terribly wonderful,,, the repititions,,the metaphors of being invisible,, well put ,,,, i know how that feels,,, sadly so,, ergh,, i hate that feeling,,, X(..... *hugs* |
| On May 4th 2007 salamanteri Said: |
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| DIdn't really know which category to put it in.. but was thinking it could suit here.. Tried to catch some feelings from the time I had depression a few years back.. |


