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little poem of depression

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Created: 05/04 2007
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Category: Anger

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no one knows, no one cares

I sit a lone in the dark, but no one knows no one cares.

A tear falls on my chin, but still, no one knows no one cares.

I wish I could vanish in the air, no one would miss me.

I wish I could just fade away, cause no one would care.

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On May 19th 2007 PoeticPang Said: 
PoeticPang awwwww,,, it's terribly wonderful,,, the repititions,,the metaphors of being invisible,, well put ,,,, i know how that feels,,, sadly so,, ergh,, i hate that feeling,,, X(..... *hugs*
On May 4th 2007 salamanteri Said: 
salamanteri DIdn't really know which category to put it in.. but was thinking it could suit here.. Tried to catch some feelings from the time I had depression a few years back..