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turning away or loosing love can be hardRate this Poem
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Created:
05/04 2007
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162
Category:
Love
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lost love
A tear on my chin, you whipe it away.
How could I love you anyway?
You cheated, and told me you didn't love me at all.
Now your here, begging for more.
You try to kiss me, I turn away.
Last lie was enough, nothing more to say.
How could I be so naive so long?
Year after year you had done me so wrong.
I stand up from the bed, show you the door.
You can't understand why I don't want you anymore.
Unwillingly you leave, door open behind.
A second I regret, not making you mine.
I close the door, sit back to the bed.
Sitting still, totaly blank in my head.
Now it's done, no more doupts left.
Your gone from my life, that's how it's ment.
| On May 23rd 2007 Glork21 Said: |
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| wow you got some good poetry. Like it alot. |
| On May 19th 2007 PoeticPang Said: |
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| "doubts"......... "meant"..... urgh,,,, still good,, just good,,,, makes me depressed for love,, lost kinda love,,, but then,,, i know both stories to the sides... so i understand u...... somehow? |
| On May 17th 2007 cursedwiccan89 Said: |
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| it is similar and goooooood i likey |
| On May 4th 2007 so08 Said: |
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| i like it |


