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Created: 04/16 2007
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Category: Joy

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painful hello

hello is as painful as saying goodbye/ hello dear beauty of mine, hello my new found sorrow/ you are my posession, yet not at all/ i speak for you, your every slurr, every nothings, and each wishful somethings/ hello to inevitability, hello my commitment inability/ hello is as painful as saying goodbye/ i greet you with kind words, kindest of the kinds/ i meet you with kisses, softest kisses of the kisses/ we both agree to disagree, though often choose to disagree to agree/ romance, the most unlikely word to describe our coupling, however time to time we are labeled to such label/ hello is as painful as saying goodbye/ there is no love in this love story/ not even a footnote or a comical relief/ there is no end to this hopelessness/ because if there were a denouement, all things known shall become unknown/ hello my bittersweet pain rhapsody, hello my cancerous contradiction/ "hello" is far more painful than saying "goodbye."

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On April 25th 2007 lestatinator Said: 
lestatinator SWEET JESUS CHRIST SUPERSTAR!!!!!!!!! NOW THAT FUCKING ROX!!! i mean, dude, this is one of the best poems i have ever read, SERIOUSLY!!!! don't think im overexaggerating, this really does rock some serious ass, i freakin in luv with ur art.
On April 18th 2007 damndiabetic09 Said: 
damndiabetic09 jeez how do you get subjects that are so deep, but we come across them everyday. I would have never thought to write of something like this in a million years. and not only that, but then you are able to make an outstanding and beautiful poem about it. You have my respect!