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My Poems
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Tracing |
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14
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Repetitive |
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17
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Untitled~ |
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11
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Dancing on mirrors |
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14
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LINGERING~ |
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19
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This Girl` |
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6
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Love I missed |
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6
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I dispise labels~yet I wear designer |
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Starting~end |
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9
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Ashes of Ashley |
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7
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Ghostly waving |
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5
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RAZORBLADES |
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Who Knows |
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Forgot |
Ghostly waving
Heart song and dance had me at
Where am I really
What were you thinking
How was the feeling
of losing the wonder of
am I fading or merely growing
I can destroy so easily
My everything out of bounds
with what was or what could/should be.
I never said I'd play along forever
Games can steal my energy
please don't forget why we're here
I'm not that for a reason
I'm not scared of being scared
I'm somewhere floating in or out
to understand I can't
I've strained my thoughts on that.
It's not where I belong
mine is merely being
intertwining in the now
unknowing in the know
i fell beneath your song
it's lies kept me in the words
the melody of promise
the feigned shimmery zen
You're everywhere as much as I
I can't save you though I'll try
Tarnished gold tarnished self
You'll shatter the glass in seconds
run away just leave
the danger could bring the meaning
I need.
muah, it has been lovely, lovable and quite charming
Exudes a sparlkly goodbye.
Mostly waving am I.
| On July 11th 2009 flutytute Said: |
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| That would make a beautiful song |
| On July 1st 2009 muse4apoem Said: |
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| There is so much hidden meaning in this. I can't quite solve it myself. I can tell though there is a lot of thought in this nice work. :) |
| On June 29th 2009 bluedevil7 Said: |
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| I can tell ya were kinda lettin your mercury out rule you here. It's like a whole lotta quick thoughts. I like how you did this sweetie. |
| On June 28th 2009 EvilRaven9892 Said: |
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| it kinda has a spooky feeling. It gave me goosebumps. But fantasic Ash! |
| On June 27th 2009 sixtiespixie Said: |
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| thnks for the rates minus comments :) |


