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Created: 06/27 2009
Views: 118
Category: Passion

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Forgot

Ghostly waving

Heart song and dance had me at

Where am I really

What were you thinking

How was the feeling

of losing the wonder of

am I fading or merely growing

I can destroy so easily

My everything out of bounds

with what was or what could/should be.

I never said I'd play along forever

Games can steal my energy

please don't forget why we're here

I'm not that for a reason

I'm not scared of being scared

I'm somewhere floating in or out

to understand I can't

I've strained my thoughts on that.

It's not where I belong

 mine is merely being

 intertwining in the now

unknowing in the know

 i fell beneath your song

it's lies kept me in the words

the melody of promise

the feigned shimmery zen

 You're everywhere as much as I

I can't save you though I'll try

Tarnished gold tarnished self

You'll shatter the glass in seconds

run away just leave

the danger could bring the meaning

I need.

muah, it has been lovely, lovable and quite charming

Exudes a sparlkly goodbye.

Mostly waving am I.

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On July 11th 2009 flutytute Said: 
flutytute That would make a beautiful song
On July 1st 2009 muse4apoem Said: 
muse4apoem There is so much hidden meaning in this. I can't quite solve it myself. I can tell though there is a lot of thought in this nice work. :)
On June 29th 2009 bluedevil7 Said: 
bluedevil7 I can tell ya were kinda lettin your mercury out rule you here. It's like a whole lotta quick thoughts. I like how you did this sweetie.
On June 28th 2009 EvilRaven9892 Said: 
EvilRaven9892 it kinda has a spooky feeling. It gave me goosebumps. But fantasic Ash!
On June 27th 2009 sixtiespixie Said: 
sixtiespixie thnks for the rates minus comments :)