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Created:
10/02 2007
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125
Category:
Passion
My Poems
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River |
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The Avenue Trees |
River
Driving along the embankment
My eyes catch a glimpse of what
My head had seen well in advance.
My heart does a little jump
With loving memory of the water,
Yet at the same time relief washes over me
Like the waves themselves in silence.
Closing eyes and feeling the motion,
Of the boat upon the water,
The smooth rhythm of the blades,
The sun upon my shoulders and knees.
Murmurs of voices from the riverside,
And cars beeping their horns,
As ignorant drivers break the pattern.
Cold day and race pace,
Legs screaming straight and back again,
Gasping breaths and groans of pain.
"Come on, we've almost caught them"
A hoarse throat calls from the back,
Conveying the passion.
Finish line and blackout.
| On February 23rd 2008 samforally121 Said: |
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| Pretty good! =] u know wht i can feel the scences u have created in this...well done =] |
| On October 17th 2007 emochic4lyfe Said: |
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| i like it |
| On October 13th 2007 fallenbloodxxx Said: |
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| i dont know you but i still like it. |
| On October 10th 2007 comacozi101 Said: |
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| this is awesome |
| On October 10th 2007 California1516 Said: |
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| this is good..nice work:) |


