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Created:
10/10 2007
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137
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Other
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The Avenue Trees |
The Smokers
The smokers are in their line in the alley,
Like prisoners on death row,
Failed escapes are things of the past,
As now they simply succumb to their fate.
Brought together as if by tragedy,
They make idle conversation,
And watch as dead autumn leaves swirl,
Around the used cigarette butts.
Please Login to post comments| On February 23rd 2008 samforally121 Said: |
| short and snappy...i like it =] |
| On December 4th 2007 Laralei Said: |
| This one is beautifully written. You have amazing syntax, did you know that? |
| On October 17th 2007 emochic4lyfe Said: |
| short but to the point good job... |
| On October 13th 2007 fallenbloodxxx Said: |
| i like this one too... |
| On October 10th 2007 nolenkatie Said: |
| I love the imagery, the way it flows...and I hate second hand smoke...good job! |
| On October 10th 2007 comacozi101 Said: |
| hmmm...good i hate smoking... |
| On October 10th 2007 California1516 Said: |
| nice wording of it! |
| On October 10th 2007 lisaljb Said: |
| oh wow, this is well written short poem,nice work! |
