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Created: 08/19 2007
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Category: Anger

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Losing All I Am

How come the can't open their eyes to the light?

Why do they continue to fall down blind?

Stabbing me with their swords of rejection,

killing me with their vile infection.

Trying to run with their eyes tightly closed,

giving only their worst like i won't know.

I fight my way through their hate with a passion,

pushing through it until they break and bend.

Losing every trace of my emotion,

as i collapse into this tomb i have opened.

Plastic like all of these faces that surround me,

Shamefully i become one of them as i lose my identity....

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On July 8th 2008 hollistechik08 Said: 
hollistechik08 wow. awesomee
On May 19th 2008 shadow211477kb Said: 
shadow211477kb Wow that is wonderfuly written i love it!
On February 27th 2008 AngelOfNight47 Said: 
AngelOfNight47 wow that one blew me away. it's so true, and so amazingly good.
On February 16th 2008 NcGirl321 Said: 
NcGirl321 Wow. One word...Interesting
On January 14th 2008 hirschey11 Said: 
hirschey11 i love it!!!
On January 6th 2008 ralicia Said: 
ralicia cool
On December 29th 2007 xluckxnumberx7 Said: 
xluckxnumberx7 awsome, great, tottaly goooodddd job i love it
On December 21st 2007 Smarties4 Said: 
Smarties4 You use the word 'infection' a lot coupled with what people have done or do. It's strange how you can have a recurring thought in so many poems. It almost makes it as though it has to be true, that people do in face infect you. anyway, too much rambling. Awesome poem.
On November 4th 2007 kellyjob Said: 
kellyjob Yeah, conforming sucks.... Good poem!
On October 31st 2007 dsouthernlily Said: 
my picture
:) LIKE
On September 29th 2007 edwardlover92 Said: 
edwardlover92 awesome!!!!
On September 28th 2007 xxxAngelicaxxx Said: 
xxxAngelicaxxx i love it ♥
On September 27th 2007 zodiac3892 Said: 
zodiac3892 thats pretty good man. very well written
On September 8th 2007 wchocolate07 Said: 
wchocolate07 this is awesome!!!!! :)
On August 29th 2007 Twincult Said: 
Twincult great poem...
On August 25th 2007 YoungPoet213 Said: 
YoungPoet213 WOW! It's great.
On August 25th 2007 Gigglez200969 Said: 
Gigglez200969 Very Good Job!
On August 24th 2007 j2asterisk Said: 
j2asterisk ditto to everyone below me =]
On August 23rd 2007 lalaloca2 Said: 
lalaloca2 WOW you sre really talented!
On August 23rd 2007 cjaskot Said: 
cjaskot i absolutely love this
On August 23rd 2007 brokenwing3 Said: 
brokenwing3 I can def connect with this poem! beautiful depiction
On August 22nd 2007 emily28793 Said: 
emily28793 this poem roxx lols
On August 22nd 2007 thatbluewoman Said: 
thatbluewoman i liiike. :)
On August 22nd 2007 LostSoul1121 Said: 
LostSoul1121 Again I say....AWSOMENESS!!! Your an awsome poet!!
On August 22nd 2007 realpaintheory Said: 
realpaintheory brilliant :) xXx