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Created:
08/19 2007
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871
Category:
Anger
My Poems
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Losing All I Am
How come the can't open their eyes to the light?
Why do they continue to fall down blind?
Stabbing me with their swords of rejection,
killing me with their vile infection.
Trying to run with their eyes tightly closed,
giving only their worst like i won't know.
I fight my way through their hate with a passion,
pushing through it until they break and bend.
Losing every trace of my emotion,
as i collapse into this tomb i have opened.
Plastic like all of these faces that surround me,
Shamefully i become one of them as i lose my identity....
| On July 8th 2008 hollistechik08 Said: |
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| wow. awesomee |
| On May 19th 2008 shadow211477kb Said: |
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| Wow that is wonderfuly written i love it! |
| On February 27th 2008 AngelOfNight47 Said: |
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| wow that one blew me away. it's so true, and so amazingly good. |
| On February 16th 2008 NcGirl321 Said: |
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| Wow. One word...Interesting |
| On January 14th 2008 hirschey11 Said: |
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| i love it!!! |
| On January 6th 2008 ralicia Said: |
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| cool |
| On December 29th 2007 xluckxnumberx7 Said: |
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| awsome, great, tottaly goooodddd job i love it |
| On December 21st 2007 Smarties4 Said: |
| On November 4th 2007 kellyjob Said: |
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| Yeah, conforming sucks.... Good poem! |
| On October 31st 2007 dsouthernlily Said: |
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| :) LIKE |
| On September 29th 2007 edwardlover92 Said: |
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| awesome!!!! |
| On September 28th 2007 xxxAngelicaxxx Said: |
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| i love it ♥ |
| On September 27th 2007 zodiac3892 Said: |
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| thats pretty good man. very well written |
| On September 8th 2007 wchocolate07 Said: |
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| this is awesome!!!!! :) |
| On August 29th 2007 Twincult Said: |
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| great poem... |
| On August 25th 2007 YoungPoet213 Said: |
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| WOW! It's great. |
| On August 25th 2007 Gigglez200969 Said: |
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| Very Good Job! |
| On August 24th 2007 j2asterisk Said: |
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| ditto to everyone below me =] |
| On August 23rd 2007 lalaloca2 Said: |
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| WOW you sre really talented! |
| On August 23rd 2007 cjaskot Said: |
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| i absolutely love this |
| On August 23rd 2007 brokenwing3 Said: |
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| I can def connect with this poem! beautiful depiction |
| On August 22nd 2007 emily28793 Said: |
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| this poem roxx lols |
| On August 22nd 2007 thatbluewoman Said: |
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| i liiike. :) |
| On August 22nd 2007 LostSoul1121 Said: |
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| Again I say....AWSOMENESS!!! Your an awsome poet!! |
| On August 22nd 2007 realpaintheory Said: |
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| brilliant :) xXx |


