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Created: 06/11 2008
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Category: Anger

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Deathless song

I never was able to see past this shadow that is my fantasy; instead I reveled in this blurred version of reality.

I'm held fast by the cutting chains of dependency, which have been forged by the vast void that gnaws at my heart endlessly.

It is from my knees that I scream for some mercy, I yearn for a solace that cannot be stolen from me.

My heart burns from the pain that ravages it relentlessly, the vicious wound inflicted by the jagged knife of insecurity.

My sunken eyes speak of scars etched deeply upon my heart; they silently sing the story of a frightened girl cowering in the dark.

Everything she was and everything she believed always seemed to be swallowed by the shadow of conformity.

 She is lost amid the darkness and all that can be heard are her desperate pleas, her crying out for a savior, to lift this shroud of infirmity. 

She's stumbling in the ashes of who she used to be, wandering in a field of countless faces trying to recover her identity.

This hollow person she's become, this shattered shell of her former beauty, searches endlessly for some ease, for someone to pierce the cloud of nameless conformity.

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On November 26th 2008 olchii Said: 
olchii love it, the name really draws you in, and you are not dissapointed.
On October 14th 2008 Thegeminisking Said: 
Thegeminisking Well Put my Dear... Very Good. 13th
On September 24th 2008 brokenwings122 Said: 
brokenwings122 I, personally, am not a fan of poems with rhyme. However, yours was incredible. I am very impressed, although I do apologize for taking so long to review it. If you would be so kind as to read my stories especially Full Moon Rising and Story Book Romance, it would be greatly appreciated. Thanks, and best of luck. -Caiti
On August 1st 2008 lilpain0103 Said: 
lilpain0103 WOW this was really good. I LOVED it.
On August 1st 2008 CoolKat3 Said: 
CoolKat3 nice i really like it
On July 26th 2008 UnSane420 Said: 
UnSane420 this is amazing i love it!
On July 22nd 2008 brokenScArLeT Said: 
brokenScArLeT thats a really deadly poem awesome!!!! lol... it rocks :))
On July 15th 2008 shadow211477kb Said: 
shadow211477kb That is an awesome poem!! i love it! thanks for letting me knwo you had a new one. Keep up the good writting
On July 15th 2008 WOPPERBABY256 Said: 
WOPPERBABY256 you done a fantastic job!
On July 15th 2008 rubyjean16 Said: 
rubyjean16 omg this poem is so good it kinda remeinds me of when i started to vhange myself for a guy which is totally stupid and all but hey we all do it but your poem is sooo good how do you come up with it all
On July 14th 2008 gusty13 Said: 
gusty13 good job
On July 14th 2008 IRL15 Said: 
IRL15 Yea its way deep. I like the style you used. Very well done
On July 14th 2008 KillMeKissMe24 Said: 
KillMeKissMe24 That's really pretty and very deep
On July 11th 2008 37377773 Said: 
37377773 its deep
On July 11th 2008 eddaboy Said: 
eddaboy wow.. pretty deep.
On July 11th 2008 jcompi1 Said: 
jcompi1 i can relate
On July 10th 2008 random0chica0 Said: 
random0chica0 wow this way betta than mine
On July 8th 2008 hollistechik08 Said: 
hollistechik08 awesomee
On July 8th 2008 lisaljb Said: 
lisaljb Wow! Fantastic poem! :) I love the thinking!
On July 6th 2008 JustifyMisery Said: 
JustifyMisery wow insanely good
On July 6th 2008 edwardlover92 Said: 
edwardlover92 deep, very very good
On July 5th 2008 lordidiot Said: 
my picture
i like it
On July 2nd 2008 mydragonlord Said: 
mydragonlord intence!!!
On July 1st 2008 piratesrule78 Said: 
piratesrule78 this is so good it deserves a 100 rates good job
On June 30th 2008 lilpain0103 Said: 
lilpain0103 this is really good