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Screaming for release |
Deathless song
I never was able to see past this shadow that is my fantasy; instead I reveled in this blurred version of reality.
I'm held fast by the cutting chains of dependency, which have been forged by the vast void that gnaws at my heart endlessly.
It is from my knees that I scream for some mercy, I yearn for a solace that cannot be stolen from me.
My heart burns from the pain that ravages it relentlessly, the vicious wound inflicted by the jagged knife of insecurity.
My sunken eyes speak of scars etched deeply upon my heart; they silently sing the story of a frightened girl cowering in the dark.
Everything she was and everything she believed always seemed to be swallowed by the shadow of conformity.
She is lost amid the darkness and all that can be heard are her desperate pleas, her crying out for a savior, to lift this shroud of infirmity.
She's stumbling in the ashes of who she used to be, wandering in a field of countless faces trying to recover her identity.
This hollow person she's become, this shattered shell of her former beauty, searches endlessly for some ease, for someone to pierce the cloud of nameless conformity.
| On November 26th 2008 olchii Said: |
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| love it, the name really draws you in, and you are not dissapointed. |
| On October 14th 2008 Thegeminisking Said: |
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| Well Put my Dear... Very Good.
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| On September 24th 2008 brokenwings122 Said: |
| On August 1st 2008 lilpain0103 Said: |
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| WOW this was really good. I LOVED it. |
| On August 1st 2008 CoolKat3 Said: |
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| nice i really like it |
| On July 26th 2008 UnSane420 Said: |
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| this is amazing i love it! |
| On July 22nd 2008 brokenScArLeT Said: |
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| thats a really deadly poem awesome!!!! lol... it rocks :)) |
| On July 15th 2008 shadow211477kb Said: |
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| That is an awesome poem!! i love it! thanks for letting me knwo you had a new one. Keep up the good writting |
| On July 15th 2008 WOPPERBABY256 Said: |
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| you done a fantastic job! |
| On July 15th 2008 rubyjean16 Said: |
| On July 14th 2008 gusty13 Said: |
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| good job |
| On July 14th 2008 IRL15 Said: |
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| Yea its way deep. I like the style you used. Very well done |
| On July 14th 2008 KillMeKissMe24 Said: |
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| That's really pretty and very deep |
| On July 11th 2008 37377773 Said: |
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| its deep |
| On July 11th 2008 eddaboy Said: |
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| wow.. pretty deep. |
| On July 11th 2008 jcompi1 Said: |
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| i can relate |
| On July 10th 2008 random0chica0 Said: |
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| wow this way betta than mine |
| On July 8th 2008 hollistechik08 Said: |
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| awesomee
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| On July 8th 2008 lisaljb Said: |
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| Wow! Fantastic poem! :) I love the thinking! |
| On July 6th 2008 JustifyMisery Said: |
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| wow insanely good |
| On July 6th 2008 edwardlover92 Said: |
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| deep, very very good |
| On July 5th 2008 lordidiot Said: |
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| i like it |
| On July 2nd 2008 mydragonlord Said: |
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| intence!!! |
| On July 1st 2008 piratesrule78 Said: |
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| this is so good it deserves a 100 rates good job |
| On June 30th 2008 lilpain0103 Said: |
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| this is really good |


