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Created: 02/01 2009
Views: 193
Category: Pain

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From Within

There is a lone figure
standing atop a hill gazing all around.
The harsh wind is unforgiving.
It tears at her frail silhoutte.

Her face is worn and heavy,
her breathing labored,
as though she were struggling
in a sea of insecurity.

Her eyes sing of unknown sorrows
buried deep in her soul,
melodies of anguish,
of a long forgotten hope.

She lost this battle long before it ever began,
she no longer has the will to fight, 
enclosed in 
Failure's suffocating hands.

Tears stain her face and burning memories
continually haunt her vision.
Voices churn in her head,
reaping seeds sown by 

a deep rooted deception.

Pulsating sounds,
voices that echo inside her head,
break her down, 
they steal her breath...

There,
a lone figure
stands atop a hill,
weeping...

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On March 17th 2009 dropdeadsucka Said: 
dropdeadsucka I really loved it. It was great. I especially adored the part with the 'Failure's suffocating hands'. It was great. Keep it up![;
On March 15th 2009 mattyotatty Said: 
mattyotatty Just to be diffrent i hate reading and well i didnt read it but well your Hot ...!! :) ;)
On March 5th 2009 CrazyHazel15 Said: 
CrazyHazel15 wow thats so awesome
On February 27th 2009 MCRsLover Said: 
MCRsLover that's so beautiful! great job!
On February 21st 2009 luvhim4ever12 Said: 
luvhim4ever12 great job
On February 19th 2009 AridianVamp Said: 
AridianVamp You should become a creative writer like I am striving for...that is REALLY good.
On February 14th 2009 twilightwuv Said: 
twilightwuv awesome! great work
On February 13th 2009 josephsbabegir Said: 
josephsbabegir its very deep i can tell u that i love it geart work better then mine nice keep it up
On February 11th 2009 laceyfine Said: 
laceyfine wow, you're a very great writer
On February 10th 2009 elvira2196 Said: 
elvira2196 very deep, very detailed. I really enjoyed it.
On February 10th 2009 Poglu Said: 
Poglu Nicely done=]
On February 10th 2009 Eviiebaybee10 Said: 
Eviiebaybee10 This is amazing keep it up gurl
On February 9th 2009 DashboardLogic Said: 
DashboardLogic I love this! The flow and the imagery are amazing! I can relate to it a lot right now so it makes me like it even more. I can feel her pain. It’s beautiful. Great job.
On February 9th 2009 momsrule Said: 
momsrule love itttt :)
On February 6th 2009 Neji778 Said: 
Neji778 wow really good =)
On February 5th 2009 whitneyleighh Said: 
whitneyleighh that's amazing. (:
On February 5th 2009 chickp96 Said: 
chickp96 Speechless! I know how that feels and I read this like onemillion times. Ah-mazing job.
On February 4th 2009 123skullbabi Said: 
123skullbabi Amazing! Awsome job with this poem keep it up :D
On February 4th 2009 tnke95 Said: 
tnke95 Awesome! :D
On February 3rd 2009 xxxshylaxxx Said: 
xxxshylaxxx wow! this is amazing
On February 3rd 2009 audica Said: 
audica this is awesome. great job with the darkness and the emotion of the poem.
On February 3rd 2009 kinzie52 Said: 
kinzie52 ahh wow. this is truly great. a good poet always makes a mark on her readers. thats how a poet finds true success. and you have just now given me the inspiration to write a new poem.
On February 2nd 2009 EdwardRoxMySox Said: 
EdwardRoxMySox wow.. i envy you your talent soo much. your a truly amazing writer, =]
On February 2nd 2009 firefox92 Said: 
firefox92 Wow! I can relate to it in so many ways. It is really good! keep it up!
On February 2nd 2009 Realmuckoy Said: 
Realmuckoy wow this is absolutely amazing :) It's been a while since I've read one of your pieces. Kudos