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Created:
02/01 2009
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193
Category:
Pain
My Poems
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solace |
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30
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falling up |
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are you hollywood? |
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the reason |
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stop,go |
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trapped from within |
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broken carnations |
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shattered |
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last chance to breathe |
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sudden panic |
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Losing All I Am |
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Despite All You See.... |
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Deception |
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Blackened Rose |
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Screaming for release |
From Within
There is a lone figure
standing atop a hill gazing all around.
The harsh wind is unforgiving.
It tears at her frail silhoutte.
Her face is worn and heavy,
her breathing labored,
as though she were struggling
in a sea of insecurity.
Her eyes sing of unknown sorrows
buried deep in her soul,
melodies of anguish,
of a long forgotten hope.
She lost this battle long before it ever began,
she no longer has the will to fight,
enclosed in
Failure's suffocating hands.
Tears stain her face and burning memories
continually haunt her vision.
Voices churn in her head,
reaping seeds sown by
a deep rooted deception.
Pulsating sounds,
voices that echo inside her head,
break her down,
they steal her breath...
There,
a lone figure
stands atop a hill,
weeping...
| On March 17th 2009 dropdeadsucka Said: |
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| I really loved it. It was great. I especially adored the part with the 'Failure's suffocating hands'. It was great. Keep it up![; |
| On March 15th 2009 mattyotatty Said: |
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| Just to be diffrent i hate reading and well i didnt read it but well your Hot ...!! :) ;) |
| On March 5th 2009 CrazyHazel15 Said: |
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| wow thats so awesome |
| On February 27th 2009 MCRsLover Said: |
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| that's so beautiful!
great job! |
| On February 21st 2009 luvhim4ever12 Said: |
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| great job
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| On February 19th 2009 AridianVamp Said: |
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| You should become a creative writer like I am striving for...that is REALLY good.
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| On February 14th 2009 twilightwuv Said: |
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| awesome! great work |
| On February 13th 2009 josephsbabegir Said: |
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| its very deep i can tell u that i love it geart work better then mine nice keep it up |
| On February 11th 2009 laceyfine Said: |
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| wow, you're a very great writer |
| On February 10th 2009 elvira2196 Said: |
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| very deep, very detailed. I really enjoyed it. |
| On February 10th 2009 Poglu Said: |
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| Nicely done=] |
| On February 10th 2009 Eviiebaybee10 Said: |
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| This is amazing keep it up gurl |
| On February 9th 2009 DashboardLogic Said: |
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| I love this! The flow and the imagery are amazing! I can relate to it a lot right now so it makes me like it even more. I can feel her pain. It’s beautiful. Great job. |
| On February 9th 2009 momsrule Said: |
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| love itttt :) |
| On February 6th 2009 Neji778 Said: |
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| wow really good =) |
| On February 5th 2009 whitneyleighh Said: |
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| that's amazing. (: |
| On February 5th 2009 chickp96 Said: |
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| Speechless!
I know how that feels and I read this like onemillion times.
Ah-mazing job. |
| On February 4th 2009 123skullbabi Said: |
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| Amazing! Awsome job with this poem keep it up :D |
| On February 4th 2009 tnke95 Said: |
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| Awesome! :D |
| On February 3rd 2009 xxxshylaxxx Said: |
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| wow! this is amazing |
| On February 3rd 2009 audica Said: |
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| this is awesome. great job with the darkness and the emotion of the poem. |
| On February 3rd 2009 kinzie52 Said: |
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| ahh wow. this is truly great. a good poet always makes a mark on her readers. thats how a poet finds true success. and you have just now given me the inspiration to write a new poem. |
| On February 2nd 2009 EdwardRoxMySox Said: |
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| wow.. i envy you your talent soo much. your a truly amazing writer, =] |
| On February 2nd 2009 firefox92 Said: |
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| Wow! I can relate to it in so many ways. It is really good! keep it up! |
| On February 2nd 2009 Realmuckoy Said: |
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| wow this is absolutely amazing :) It's been a while since I've read one of your pieces. Kudos |


