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Created:
06/24 2007
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412
Category:
Pain
My Poems
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last chance to breathe |
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Losing All I Am |
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Despite All You See.... |
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Deception |
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Blackened Rose |
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Screaming for release |
falling up
i claim sight yet i refuse to see so i crawl through the dark with the light in my pocket. my eyes are sewn shut so i stumble through life with my heart encavessed by shadow,all the while i quench the fire in my soul. i fear the darkness instead of embracing the light. take this nothingness from me.i've sat in the dark idlely for too long.im not the same person i was before i met you. you helped me find the stranger inside of me. im sick of staring into dead eys,eyes that look but dont see. i want something no one can take from me,a light that wont burn out.im tired of sight without any sense of feeling.help me open up my useless eyes...
| On January 25th 2008 bananashits Said: |
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| its great.....im not that good,but i could use some more time to revise my poems.........its was nice, makes me want a taco.......... |
| On January 21st 2008 BloodEmo Said: |
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| ^_^ awesome |
| On December 25th 2007 MountainPearl Said: |
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| wow!!!! its beautiful |
| On December 21st 2007 Smarties4 Said: |
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| As below... |
| On November 25th 2007 EmoKid928 Said: |
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| really good |
| On September 27th 2007 LJS2004 Said: |
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| I like it!!! |
| On September 13th 2007 Krys59973 Said: |
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| soul searching.., i think |
| On July 27th 2007 daisylady719 Said: |
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| You really are quite talented....I love reading your work! |
| On July 26th 2007 alexia66 Said: |
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| nice. shows ur hunger for something |
| On July 23rd 2007 VeryEvilBitch Said: |
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| Very good i like it |
| On July 17th 2007 demonica666 Said: |
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| I feel this poem wow |
| On July 14th 2007 babycrzzy Said: |
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| great job |
| On July 11th 2007 fgggfx Said: |
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| i like it, it's very deep and dark with alot of emotion |
| On July 10th 2007 meltice01 Said: |
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| wow its very deep i like it alot !! ;) |
| On July 9th 2007 PoeticPang Said: |
| On June 30th 2007 mcihellejane Said: |
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| I like this one-it is so desperate~ |


