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something in your eyes...

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Created: 06/24 2007
Views: 395
Category: Love

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the reason

my words simply fade to nothing.

this hole which i have dug for myself  grows deeper.

now the words are resonating yet falling unanswered as the wind blows them away.

 finally the silence i longed for ,but now i wish it gone.

the solitude i once ached for is replaced with a yearning for you.

im breathing but im dead inside.

 i stare at you with these eyes, these vacant glass eyes and i just stare for the longest time wondering what you see.

i remember your words for they have not been blown away,and it is in your eyes that i see a reason to live.

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On December 21st 2007 Smarties4 Said: 
Smarties4 Awesome! :P
On October 27th 2007 crazygirl2313 Said: 
crazygirl2313 wow thats really good
On September 27th 2007 LJS2004 Said: 
LJS2004 INteresting thats a good one too!
On August 18th 2007 ausjo Said: 
ausjo Very expressive. Good job.
On August 14th 2007 nickandfallon Said: 
nickandfallon Wonderful! Sounds like it could be a really good song. Great job!
On August 10th 2007 blah2blah Said: 
blah2blah you expressed how you felt about someone in very little words...that is very uncommon and hard to do for most. amazing job, it was very moving.
On July 17th 2007 demonica666 Said: 
demonica666 awwww
On July 14th 2007 babycrzzy Said: 
babycrzzy i'm moved this one is really nice u need more ratings
On July 9th 2007 PoeticPang Said: 
PoeticPang meh,,,,,,,,,,, this one reminds me of someone,,, gaarrrgh,,,,,,, i get what u mean,,, it's a nice poem,, tho i do not completely agree with it,,, but,, that's something else on and on,,,,,,,,, nvm,,,,,,,, good job~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Pang
On July 5th 2007 alexia66 Said: 
alexia66 sweet adn awww, i feel moved by this, :D nice poem