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My Poems
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solace |
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30
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falling up |
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are you hollywood? |
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the reason |
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stop,go |
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trapped from within |
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broken carnations |
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shattered |
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last chance to breathe |
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sudden panic |
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Losing All I Am |
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Despite All You See.... |
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Deception |
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Blackened Rose |
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Screaming for release |
shattered
With eyes sewn shut they try to show me the way,
but all they show me is that they're liars and fakes.
No matter how hard i try to forget what they said,
their words echo endlessly inside my head.
I won't surrender to what they want me to be,
i won't conform to be another in their corrupt fallacy.
There is a fire in me that only you can ignite,
to stop the pain and the hate that comes from their lies.
I've lost all sense of touch,i feel cold and distant,
it's getting harder to fight the dark,i'm so strained from resisting.
I've stumbled through life with a false sense of direction,
because of their deceit which caused a fatal infection that has broken
my heart and stolen my vision.
I'm looking for that stranger inside of me,
the only person that i've ever wanted to be.
And as i stand here now with my heart laid bare for all to see,
the only left in my way is a reflection of me....
| On April 23rd 2009 4thgod Said: |
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| You are an extremely talented writer. All your work is extrordianry. As long as you keep true to yourself your work will always be this amazing. |
| On February 20th 2009 valt5 Said: |
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| i like! |
| On February 3rd 2009 AurumLuna Said: |
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| That is really cool. I like the idea of fighting the power and lies of others. Nicely constructed. |
| On July 16th 2008 Chuck790 Said: |
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| wow im speechless that was breathtaking um wow! |
| On April 26th 2008 MissinYou21 Said: |
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| This is good...Add me and check out my poems.. Plz and thanx |
| On March 6th 2008 JebasFireRed Said: |
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| The Ending Was the Line I Like Da Most |
| On February 27th 2008 AngelOfNight47 Said: |
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| wow talk about my life story written down. It's amazing. it's a very intoxicating poem that has really good meaning behind it. I absolutely love it! |
| On February 22nd 2008 stephyjeffy Said: |
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| this is very good
very deep too |
| On February 6th 2008 willtboyd Said: |
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| its really good. you release whats been inside and trust me i know thats hard!! |
| On February 6th 2008 fyuzion Said: |
| On January 30th 2008 KaytlynnMM Said: |
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| omg i love it this is awesome |
| On January 25th 2008 raymica Said: |
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| I loved it. |
| On January 22nd 2008 olchii Said: |
| On January 22nd 2008 seekerovtruth Said: |
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| Whoa. You just told my life story. That is so freaky, in a good way. haha I absolutely love the rawness of emotion you displayed here. To thine own self be true. Peace |
| On January 22nd 2008 JEZUZ666 Said: |
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| so insightful im in love |
| On January 22nd 2008 poeticspud Said: |
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| I like :) |
| On January 21st 2008 Dae99 Said: |
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| WOW im speechless |
| On January 21st 2008 slyjamma Said: |
| On January 21st 2008 artfreak101 Said: |
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| wow this is ah-mazing..u have talent=] |
| On January 21st 2008 broadwaybound Said: |
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| nice job. you're very talented. |
| On January 21st 2008 akrovaz Said: |
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| I can definitely relate. Keep up the impressive work! |
| On January 21st 2008 vampsamurai713 Said: |
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| wow. i am thoroghly impressed. the words and depth of this poem is very intoxicating. i really like it and i like the demented feeling to express the loneliness. |
| On January 20th 2008 Ejasmink Said: |
| On January 20th 2008 LizWinker93 Said: |
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| very deep. keep up teh good work :] |
| On January 20th 2008 fawzia11 Said: |
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| I really like it! |


