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Before you screwed up your life

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Created: 03/04 2009
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Category: Lyric

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The Very Last Tear

Rock Star

I wish you'd understand

That you don't need what you think you need

And I think you should know that

You don't bleed when you think you bleed

I wish I could go back

To when you were young and new,

Before you screwed up your life,

And I would sing to you

 

-Chorus-

And you could've written

Epic love songs

But you are too sad

And always too wrong

Beautiful, you wanted,

To be a rock star,

Play your music

On your black guitar,

But you didn't make it

So you wound up right here,

Crying your heart out,

I'll sing away your tears

Tonight.

 

I'm singing these words inside

Of my lonely, worried head

I wish you could hear me

But you can't so it will go unsaid.

And I'll try to find you

One day when I find my own way

But if you are not there

I am not gonna stay.

 

-Chorus-

 

I'll be a star for you,

For you my dear, I will come home,

When I'm grown and beautiful,

Like you.

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On March 6th 2009 xxxAngelicaxxx Said: 
xxxAngelicaxxx this is nice. i really like it
On March 6th 2009 DarkSide1477 Said: 
DarkSide1477 defiantly not the same rockstar from nickelback but its good, i like it
On March 6th 2009 UnSane420 Said: 
UnSane420 this is beautiful i love it good work
On March 5th 2009 animallover925 Said: 
animallover925 that is so good!!! I cant write songs it is too hard!!
On March 5th 2009 kimbojet13 Said: 
kimbojet13 OMG THAT'S SOOOOO COOL!!! I LOVE IT!!!
On March 5th 2009 assumetheworst Said: 
assumetheworst by the way...am i really the master? it made me smile so
On March 5th 2009 assumetheworst Said: 
assumetheworst wow, thats yer first song?? omg thats really good and i love how you made the chorus long then at the end all short :) and thad be a nice screamo/rock/hardcore song (sorry if you dun like that type of tunes) :)))) but seriously i like it and thats my honest feedback..try writing more songs, i know it may be tough and it is for me seriously but anyway heres some advice, "start by making up the title first, then worry about the words" this helps alot for me cuz automattically i KNOW what im writing about but yeah...long comment eh?
On March 5th 2009 Thugnastay227 Said: 
Thugnastay227 good job
On March 4th 2009 fatfreemilk Said: 
fatfreemilk nice i rely like it
On March 4th 2009 KIRKME Said: 
KIRKME live the dream! lol and cute bg(: