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wishing I could stay right here

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Created: 03/12 2009
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Category: Love

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The Very Last Tear

A World Without Me

Awake at night, I hold you close in my mind,

 

Waiting to see if you'll try to stop time. It's

Over your head. And I hope you can still feel the

Rain on your face when I'm gone. Know that

Life is good, even in a world without me.

Deep down underneath your skin, you're scared of losing.

 

Wanting so badly to curl up and cry,

Inside of your head, you're really just sad

That you can't be so co-dependent anymore.

Heavy as your heart is, you're not ready to let go

Of me, or the things we've shared together. And you try to be

Unaffected by the sad things you write songs about, but they're

Terribly close to your heart now, as you lay next to me, whispering

 

My name so sweetly and gently. I slowly fade out,

Even though I'd give anything to stay.

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On March 28th 2009 xxxAngelicaxxx Said: 
xxxAngelicaxxx amazing. i love this stylee!!
On March 20th 2009 blindfaeth Said: 
blindfaeth I LOVE ACROSTICS :D You're amazing.
On March 18th 2009 kimbojet13 Said: 
kimbojet13 omg your poems are the best i have ever read and i love this one!!!
On March 16th 2009 UnSane420 Said: 
UnSane420 this is really good i like it all of your peoms are so unique you did an impressive job on this one!!!
On March 15th 2009 DarkSide1477 Said: 
DarkSide1477 incrible, fitting so much menaing into a contricting style
On March 13th 2009 assumetheworst Said: 
assumetheworst wow i love it! there tt is! the same unique style he he he he
On March 12th 2009 Thugnastay227 Said: 
Thugnastay227 impressive and i like how u composed this