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Prelude
This is the night it all comes undone
This is the prelude to our harsh war
This is the night I stop looking pretty
And disregard your perfect metaphor
This will be our last serene twilight
Tonight this anger unlocks the cage
Never again will you sleep soundlessly
Shadows will collide with your useless rage
I will yell and scream to forget you
Violence surfaces under my skin
You're gonna miss the days when I liked you
Before you knew what I know about sin
Headlights fly by as we cross the street
I chase you, but a light disctracts me
We collapse, looks like this war is over
But you are more dead than I'll ever be
This is the prelude to the end of life
This is the start of a brand new war
This is the prelude to the fight for breath
I don't want to fight with you anymore
| On May 6th 2009 megaeden Said: |
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| Great poem, im glad i read it |
| On March 27th 2009 DarkSide1477 Said: |
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| good angry poem as usual |
| On March 26th 2009 assumetheworst Said: |
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| this is awsome...and sorry it took a while for me to comment and rate my comp was being a bitch lol but on other notes, this is really goods :)) |
| On March 25th 2009 UnSane420 Said: |
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| this is really good i like it. |
| On March 24th 2009 elvira2196 Said: |
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| LOVE IT, LOVE IT!!!! YOU ARE AN EXTREMELY UNIQUE & AMAZING WRITER! |
| On March 24th 2009 blindfaeth Said: |
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| The prelude to the fight for breath...
ahhhh i love good poetry |
| On March 24th 2009 AshleyXxPiano Said: |
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| this is great! |
| On March 24th 2009 MauiWowies Said: |
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| Oh this is so good, I got a senswe of a dark violence, lol I know I cant describe thing good sometimes. It sound so, it great :) |
| On March 24th 2009 KIRKME Said: |
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| not bad(: |
| On March 24th 2009 kimbojet13 Said: |
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| OMG I LOVE IT. IT SOUNDS VERY SCINCERE BUT I JUST HAVE THE QUESTION OF WHAT PRELUDE MEANS OR IS?BUT IT'S SO AWESOME!!! |


