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This is the night it all comes undone

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Created: 03/24 2009
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Category: Fear

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Prelude

This is the night it all comes undone

This is the prelude to our harsh war

This is the night I stop looking pretty

And disregard your perfect metaphor

 

This will be our last serene twilight

Tonight this anger unlocks the cage

Never again will you sleep soundlessly

Shadows will collide with your useless rage

 

I will yell and scream to forget you

Violence surfaces under my skin

You're gonna miss the days when I liked you

Before you knew what I know about sin

 

Headlights fly by as we cross the street

I chase you, but a light disctracts me

We collapse, looks like this war is over

But you are more dead than I'll ever be

 

This is the prelude to the end of life

This is the start of a brand new war

This is the prelude to the fight for breath

I don't want to fight with you anymore

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On May 6th 2009 megaeden Said: 
megaeden Great poem, im glad i read it
On March 27th 2009 DarkSide1477 Said: 
DarkSide1477 good angry poem as usual
On March 26th 2009 assumetheworst Said: 
assumetheworst this is awsome...and sorry it took a while for me to comment and rate my comp was being a bitch lol but on other notes, this is really goods :))
On March 25th 2009 UnSane420 Said: 
UnSane420 this is really good i like it.
On March 24th 2009 elvira2196 Said: 
elvira2196 LOVE IT, LOVE IT!!!! YOU ARE AN EXTREMELY UNIQUE & AMAZING WRITER!
On March 24th 2009 blindfaeth Said: 
blindfaeth The prelude to the fight for breath... ahhhh i love good poetry
On March 24th 2009 AshleyXxPiano Said: 
AshleyXxPiano this is great!
On March 24th 2009 MauiWowies Said: 
MauiWowies Oh this is so good, I got a senswe of a dark violence, lol I know I cant describe thing good sometimes. It sound so, it great :)
On March 24th 2009 KIRKME Said: 
KIRKME not bad(:
On March 24th 2009 kimbojet13 Said: 
kimbojet13 OMG I LOVE IT. IT SOUNDS VERY SCINCERE BUT I JUST HAVE THE QUESTION OF WHAT PRELUDE MEANS OR IS?BUT IT'S SO AWESOME!!!