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Created: 09/09 2008
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Category: Pain

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Last questions before death.
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Last questions before death.

Is it okay, if you just cry? Is it okay, if you just wanna leave? Is it okay, if nothing matters to you? Is it okay, if all you wanted is gone? Is it okay, if there's no reason to live? Are you alive, if you don't really live? Are you happy, if you can't smile? Are you really you, if you can't look at the mirror without shame? Are you free, if your mind is chained? Those last questions before your death.
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On March 4th 2009 chocoriffic Said: 
chocoriffic It's very dark. I like how u clustered it all together to make a different layout than normal and the fact you didn't rhyme. I think there are too many rhyming poems. They are too cheesy sometimes. It's good. Plz read my stories, tell me wot u think and how they could get betr. http://www.testriffic.com/stories/storyshow.php?id=54351
On September 9th 2008 xBlackDawnx Said: 
xBlackDawnx (it's little bit unclear sorry)