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Time Goes By
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Created on 7-8-08
Time Goes By
By:xHickChick789x
It's alright, I'm ok
I just feel like something's wrong
Like the world is spinning too fast,
Or that I'm trapped here, with no way out
Save me, Help me
I keep thinking back to my past
As I remember all the good times I had,
A lot has changed over the years,
And time goes by faster than you can blink
I miss those good old times,
When I'd spend the day with my buddies
We would laugh, we would cry
We were always there for each other
Not now, not today
Everything is different now I don't see 'em much
Leaving them behind was the worst mistake
There is nothing I can do now,
Because time goes by faster than you can blink
No one can cheer me up anymore,
I'm just a merable girl, without them
If I had to risk my life to get them back,
I would
Save me, help me
Not now, not today
When? I ask
I feel like I'm missing something everytime
But how fast time goes by, it ain't worth it
Created on: 7/8/08
Please Login to post comments| On August 7th 2008 GeonnStwci Said : | |
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Time's passage can make for a rather strange feeling of loss as our youth fades away. Great job catching that sensation. |
| On July 26th 2008 DusGilHol Said : | |
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hell yeah this is a good one because its the truth time goes by way to fast and it seems wrong. |
| On July 25th 2008 UnSane420 Said : | |
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i love this poem its so beautiful and i've had that feeling before but good poem!!! |
| On July 24th 2008 allizawesome Said : | |
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i've been feeling the same way! i love it! |
| On July 14th 2008 takemywings Said : | |
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That is absolutely amazing!!! I love it!! Very deep and shows your feelings!! Great!!!! |
| On July 14th 2008 mydragonlord Said : | |
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I like this one make me want to scream "STOP THE WORLD, I WANT TO GET OFF!!" we can all relate to this at one time or another. brilliantly written!!! |
| On July 11th 2008 gotmilk1994 Said : | |
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I'm speachless....ok I have recovered.....i totally can relate, time does go by way too fast, so fast you can't tell you're losing someone until their gone. i'll subscribe to your poetry or if it doesn't work KMP!!!! |
| On July 8th 2008 kassie94 Said : | |
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i luv it
i can relate to this word for word
i even wrote one similar to it
its not on here though
i just luv it
let me know when u write more poems |
| On July 8th 2008 nlis2kool Said : | |
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Luv It!!!! |
| On July 8th 2008 Angel2k11 Said : | |
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this is a really good poem... i can really relate to this... you always amaze me with your poem, they are well written an full of emotion and this one is no exception!! you did an awesome job!! love it!! |
| On July 8th 2008 MaraLicious177 Said : | |
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wow, this is an amazing poem. well written |
| On July 8th 2008 Calypso32 Said : | |
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amen and amen to this, you've written something that I can relate to, and I know others feel the same way. One moment you're enjoying "finally arriving" and then you realize that you never really got there, you're still moving on. Slightly depressing, and I enjoyed this poem, a sober recall to reality. Bueno.~L |
| On July 8th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said : | |
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yeah yeah yep yep i love this......different from what u usually write...but yet keeping ur signature style on it. sad yes but also good in terms of quality i mean. |
| On July 8th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said : | |
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I love this poem but I feel exactly that way as much as right now I am. I totally understand. If u need them, then just go finding them. It is not too late. I love this poem so much! :) |
| On July 8th 2008 11Dreamgirl11 Said : | |
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LUV IT!!
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| On July 8th 2008 nickynicole901 Said : | |
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i LOVE it |
| On July 8th 2008 Andy2Anomaly Said : | |
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Very creative. I like it alot. |
| On July 8th 2008 muse4apoem Said : | |
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I really like it! Good job! :) |
