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So baby shine on, like a star in the skyRate this Poem
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Shine On
Shine On
When you are trying your best,
To express your inner desire
And no one is there to listen, don't give up
You know someone is out there
And they'll listen to what you have to say
But then there are some that won't
When they all stop and stare,
Don't be offended
You need to make some noise,
And let your voice be heard
Cuz if you don't get out there,
Everything would be different because of you
Here in this world,
There is many fakers and haters
They don't mean a thing...
Deep down inside you,
You have the power, the strength, the courage,
And all the talent you need
So baby shine on, like a star in the sky... shine on
Someday if not now, you'll light up the sky,
With all the talent you cherish
Believe me, if you try hard you will
Let your voice be heard
The world has a new face everyday
Just let it all out and you'll see
Here in this world, There is many fakers and haters They don't mean a thing... Deep down inside you, You have the power, the strength, the courage, And all the talent you need So baby shine on, like a star in the sky... shine on © 2008 by xHickChick789x [KNG]
| On August 16th 2008 Calypso32 Said : | |
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Enjoyed this, had a country whang to it and I had to smile. Brava!~L |
| On August 15th 2008 Dezeray204 Said : | |
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I like this one a lot!!!! very encouraging!!!!
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| On August 15th 2008 rockergirl929 Said : | |
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this poem is really good. i love it. |
| On August 15th 2008 ALIESAM21 Said : | |
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OHHHH, I love this good job!!! That was awesome! |
| On August 14th 2008 Natalyi Said : | |
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very well said. keep up the good. sorry it took me so long to respond haven't been on here have been very busy. lol |
| On August 14th 2008 rosiegirl24 Said : | |
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wow o___O that is awesome!!! better than my poem Everything! lol. Keep up the awesome work! |
| On August 13th 2008 chickenbroth Said : | |
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great job. |
| On August 12th 2008 kriskris222 Said : | |
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Great job! I really liked it keep up the good work! |
| On August 12th 2008 silkyMaze Said : | |
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nice |
| On August 11th 2008 poemprincess Said : | |
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Great job... |
| On August 11th 2008 KinkyKyla Said : | |
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this iz really good. nice job |
| On August 11th 2008 brndnfrnndz Said : | |
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grear job. |
| On August 11th 2008 Alli684 Said : | |
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This is really good!! |
| On August 11th 2008 kissofasia Said : | |
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excellent writing.... |
| On August 10th 2008 xXXxjuicyxXxXX Said : | |
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This is great. I'm in love with your poetry. |
| On August 10th 2008 Andy2Anomaly Said : | |
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Awesomeness :D And so true. |
| On August 10th 2008 MissCheerCap Said : | |
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*tear* I loved it and the background was amazing for it! |
| On August 10th 2008 deadpoet Said : | |
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this was beautiful hicky lol |
| On August 10th 2008 xHickChick789x Said : | |
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In response to Angel2k11: yes it is a song and sure what the heck. you can sing it if you like :) |
| On August 10th 2008 muse4apoem Said : | |
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Motivational I really like it! :) |
| On August 10th 2008 Angel2k11 Said : | |
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woh the whole works...copyrighted and everything!! awesome i love this....could i sing it? it is a song right? i like the line...and all the talent you need...this is really really good!! love it!
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| On August 10th 2008 brndnfrnndz Said : | |
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love it. goood job |
| On August 10th 2008 Aegle Said : | |
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wow, so normaly i don't read poems and i just opened it and said why the hell not and well i really needed that! like you have no idea, it was kinda scary reading it for me because i'm having problems and yeah. lol. Anyways i like it. |
| On August 10th 2008 nickynicole901 Said : | |
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wow..omg..i LOVE this poem..u r a good writer keep em' comming..u rock and so does ur writing :) |
| On August 10th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said : | |
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I LOVE IT!!! :) it is one of my fav poems from u. :) |


