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So baby shine on, like a star in the sky

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Shine On

Views (249) Passion Created on 8-10-08 Flag

Shine On

When you are trying your best,

To express your inner desire

And no one is there to listen, don't give up

You know someone is out there

And they'll listen to what you have to say

But then there are some that won't

 

When they all stop and stare,

Don't be offended

You need to make some noise,

And let your voice be heard

Cuz if you don't get out there,

Everything would be different because of you

 

Here in this world,

There is many fakers and haters

They don't mean a thing...

Deep down inside you,

You have the power, the strength, the courage,

And all the talent you need

So baby shine on, like a star in the sky... shine on

 

Someday if not now, you'll light up the sky,

With all the talent you cherish

Believe me, if you try hard you will

Let your voice be heard

The world has a new face everyday

Just let it all out and you'll see

 

Here in this world,

There is many fakers and haters

They don't mean a thing...

Deep down inside you,

You have the power, the strength, the courage,

And all the talent you need

So baby shine on, like a star in the sky... shine on

 

© 2008 by xHickChick789x [KNG]

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On August 16th 2008 Calypso32 Said :
Calypso32 Enjoyed this, had a country whang to it and I had to smile. Brava!~L
On August 15th 2008 Dezeray204 Said :
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I like this one a lot!!!! very encouraging!!!!
On August 15th 2008 rockergirl929 Said :
rockergirl929 this poem is really good. i love it.
On August 15th 2008 ALIESAM21 Said :
ALIESAM21 OHHHH, I love this good job!!! That was awesome!
On August 14th 2008 Natalyi Said :
Natalyi very well said. keep up the good. sorry it took me so long to respond haven't been on here have been very busy. lol
On August 14th 2008 rosiegirl24 Said :
rosiegirl24 wow o___O that is awesome!!! better than my poem Everything! lol. Keep up the awesome work!
On August 13th 2008 chickenbroth Said :
chickenbroth great job.
On August 12th 2008 kriskris222 Said :
kriskris222 Great job! I really liked it keep up the good work!
On August 12th 2008 silkyMaze Said :
silkyMaze nice
On August 11th 2008 poemprincess Said :
poemprincess Great job...
On August 11th 2008 KinkyKyla Said :
KinkyKyla this iz really good. nice job
On August 11th 2008 brndnfrnndz Said :
brndnfrnndz grear job.
On August 11th 2008 Alli684 Said :
Alli684 This is really good!!
On August 11th 2008 kissofasia Said :
kissofasia excellent writing....
On August 10th 2008 xXXxjuicyxXxXX Said :
xXXxjuicyxXxXX This is great. I'm in love with your poetry.
On August 10th 2008 Andy2Anomaly Said :
Andy2Anomaly Awesomeness :D And so true.
On August 10th 2008 MissCheerCap Said :
MissCheerCap *tear* I loved it and the background was amazing for it!
On August 10th 2008 deadpoet Said :
deadpoet this was beautiful hicky lol
On August 10th 2008 xHickChick789x Said :
xHickChick789x In response to Angel2k11: yes it is a song and sure what the heck. you can sing it if you like :)
On August 10th 2008 muse4apoem Said :
muse4apoem Motivational I really like it! :)
On August 10th 2008 Angel2k11 Said :
Angel2k11 woh the whole works...copyrighted and everything!! awesome i love this....could i sing it? it is a song right? i like the line...and all the talent you need...this is really really good!! love it!
On August 10th 2008 brndnfrnndz Said :
brndnfrnndz love it. goood job
On August 10th 2008 Aegle Said :
Aegle wow, so normaly i don't read poems and i just opened it and said why the hell not and well i really needed that! like you have no idea, it was kinda scary reading it for me because i'm having problems and yeah. lol. Anyways i like it.
On August 10th 2008 nickynicole901 Said :
nickynicole901 wow..omg..i LOVE this poem..u r a good writer keep em' comming..u rock and so does ur writing :)
On August 10th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said :
xXPunkGirl09Xx I LOVE IT!!! :) it is one of my fav poems from u. :)