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What Would You Do for Love?

Views (382) Love Created on 8-26-08 Flag

What Would You Do for Love?

By: xHickChick789x

 

If there was answers to everything,

It would always have them in it, right?

But if something would happen,

And you would lose them,

What would you do from there?

 

Stand up, and look for them

Never give up, it ain't worth losing

Fight for your life, they're gonna be there somewhere

No matter what you'd do, you'll find them,

What would you do for love?

 

That special someone might not say it first,

But you know somewhere deep down they care

Beautiful moments like this should exist,

Even if it ain't worth hoping for,

Their out there, but where?

 

Look and take action, they'll be there

Risking what you've already got, that worth it

Believe in yourself, they're gonna show up sometime

What would you do for love?

 

Created on: 8/26/08

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On November 9th 2008 chamaolie Said :
chamaolie omg... love it!! what inspires you to make such awesome poetry?
On September 18th 2008 Lovelyeyes0 Said :
Lovelyeyes0 Definitely a little choppy, but spensoroth is so wrong, I understood perfectly. Good job.
On September 15th 2008 kriskris222 Said :
kriskris222 Good work! Keep it up
On September 11th 2008 spensoroth Said :
spensoroth it ok, but most of it made little or no sense. especially the first part.
On September 2nd 2008 mypoeticrage Said :
mypoeticrage Not too bad. It does a fine job of posing a question every reader has to answer themselves, but I'm big on having my lines flow together, I think it would be perfect if you changed/added/took away a few words here and there to let it read a little smoother? I liked it though, 4 sure. Thumb up
On September 2nd 2008 kissofasia Said :
kissofasia I love this more.......very nice
On September 1st 2008 gonzo4201 Said :
gonzo4201 Quite impressive!!
On August 30th 2008 Aivilo1124 Said :
Aivilo1124 wow! thats really good!!! ♥♥♥
On August 30th 2008 KinkyKyla Said :
KinkyKyla lv it grl
On August 30th 2008 iluvrussia4evr Said :
iluvrussia4evr i will be honest you can you probably use alot more stronger words its really good, but you probably can change it up a little; if you want; i would never force anyone to do that. and have more feeling to it; if you know what i mean. I am an editor on poems in my country rusyia. I dont force people to take the advice. Its your poem. If you like it; then save it foever. NEVER EVER throw out a poem you wrote.
On August 30th 2008 XxBubblyBabexX Said :
XxBubblyBabexX I really love this
On August 29th 2008 hpfan731 Said :
hpfan731 i like it....i think you could have developed the theme more, though
On August 29th 2008 chamaolie Said :
chamaolie omg!!! love this one!!! this is now officially my favorite!! ^_^
On August 28th 2008 brokenScArLeT Said :
brokenScArLeT *job
On August 28th 2008 brokenScArLeT Said :
brokenScArLeT this is an awesome poem!!! i has alot of meaning in it good ob=))
On August 28th 2008 brokenScArLeT Said :
brokenScArLeT this is an awesome poem!!! i has alot of meaning in it good ob=))
On August 28th 2008 popopoas Said :
popopoas This is great. i guess it says alot about every one of us- wanting to be loved, and willing to do anything to obtain this elusive, dangerous treasure.
On August 28th 2008 XrenaissanceX9 Said :
XrenaissanceX9 wow... I can really relate to this right now. It's beautiful!
On August 28th 2008 lovedaisy Said :
lovedaisy wow.very true
On August 27th 2008 101091 Said :
101091 I love it. Great job.
On August 27th 2008 angelfighting Said :
angelfighting I love this. You're a wonderful writer. =]]
On August 27th 2008 KinkyKyla Said :
KinkyKyla wow very mind bobaling! lv it grl
On August 27th 2008 xXXxjuicyxXxXX Said :
xXXxjuicyxXxXX this is something else, you outdone yourself again. :]
On August 27th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said :
xXPunkGirl09Xx Wow, I can really relate to this poem but it is beautiful. :)
On August 27th 2008 lalarubio23 Said :
lalarubio23 aww i love it