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Bringin' on a Good Life
Bringin' on a Good Life By: xHickChick789x There’s nothin’ better then to sit back and relax, And watch the summer take over Sitting around being lazy, Not a care in the world… If you don’t want to get stressed out, Take a vacation to cure things up If you don’t want people telling you what to do, Take a day off to start… Bringin’ on a good life Take a seat to take a load off your feet How ‘bout a drink to calm things down Whatever you do, don’t mess it up So start bringin’ on a good life -Now that's what I'm talking about- Take a slow ride in town, Or fly down the highway, Even if you cut people off, As long as you are having fun…
If you don’t want to get stressed out, Take a vacation to cure things up If you don’t want people telling you what to do, Take a day off to start… Bringin’ on a good life Take a seat to take a load off your feet How ‘bout a drink to calm things down Whatever you do, don’t mess it up So start bringin’ on a good life -Hell yeah- Even if you feel like it's wrong, There's never a day you can't take chances, Baby, you are on a way for a good life, So just have fun with it. If you don’t want to get stressed out, Take a vacation to cure things up If you don’t want people telling you what to do, Take a day off to start… Bringin’ on a good life Take a seat to take a load off your feet How ‘bout a drink to calm things down Whatever you do, don’t mess it up So start bringin’ on a good life -Come on- Created on: 9/4/08 (Note: I have posted this in contest, but only the part in italics, because I could only post so many lines.)
Please Login to post comments| On September 30th 2008 teaganbarratt2 Said: |
| This is great Kay, you really got this thing down pact huh.
It'd be a really good song too. |
| On September 16th 2008 kriskris222 Said: |
| Nice work. I think its a better song than poem |
| On September 16th 2008 Exavolt1 Said: |
| I like how you wrote it like if you were writing a song....i dunno if this was what you were going for-but its brilliant either way |
| On September 15th 2008 5cheychey5 Said: |
| is this a song? its really good! very lighthearted and cheery. i like it a lot. if its not a song, i think it would make a great one. |
| On September 13th 2008 xXXxjuicyxXxXX Said: |
| again bravo! |
| On September 8th 2008 poemprincess Said: |
| Nice :] |
| On September 7th 2008 tinaangel17 Said: |
| This is rly good! I need to take a break..... |
| On September 7th 2008 KinkyKyla Said: |
| wow i used to be a good poem writer the only good one i have writen was lyrics to my heart. u should check it out some time |
| On September 6th 2008 imnotgay90 Said: |
| this is soooooo good. i wish i were as good as u at writing poems. i suck at them. urs is awesome though! keep me posted on them please. i luv to read them. |
| On September 5th 2008 FireAngel420 Said: |
| I love it I wish I could be that lazy right now :) great job |
| On September 5th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said: |
| I love it. IT IS AMAZING! :) I don't know what to say anything else but it's very good song. |
| On September 5th 2008 UnSane420 Said: |
| wow this blew me away i really like the flow of the whole thing every line fits perfectly together you did an amazing job at this keep it up!!!!! |
| On September 5th 2008 ChristieSaya Said: |
| yeah! |
| On September 5th 2008 lovedaisy Said: |
| woohoo!!! |
| On September 5th 2008 Calypso32 Said: |
| Most of your poetry reads like lyrics, It's fun to try and put it to a tune when I'm reading it. Great work, makes me want to head to the beach!~L |
| On September 5th 2008 gonzo4201 Said: |
| wouldn't a damn thing get done if I tried that, haha...Lovely Job... |
| On September 5th 2008 sixtiespixie Said: |
| It makes me want to lounge in the sun and draw cherry blossoms :) |
| On September 4th 2008 muse4apoem Said: |
| If only I can take a vacation. :( Wonderful poem though. |
| On September 4th 2008 101091 Said: |
| I love it. I would like to hear it put to music. Great job. |
| On September 4th 2008 XrenaissanceX9 Said: |
| Lol. I needed that. My head doesn't hurt as bad now. =D |
| On September 4th 2008 Yanks19 Said: |
| its a lovely poem..and too true..im feeling relaxed lol |
| On September 4th 2008 mymyspacesux Said: |
| hmm,nice! |
| On September 4th 2008 mitchy8125 Said: |
| I really like it. Good job on this one. 10/5 ^^ |
| On September 4th 2008 PorshaS Said: |
| really good |
| On September 4th 2008 xHickChick789x Said: |
| sorry about the few mess ups on this one. What do you think of it? |
