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Like it was a soft place to land

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Dreamy Dance

Views (194) Love Created on 9-17-08 Flag

Dreamy Dance

By: xHickChick789x

 

I gracefully gaze into your brown eyes,

Like it was no surprise.

Grasping onto your hand,

Like it was a soft place to land

 

Oh it was a beautiful thing,

It just made my heart sing

You gently whisper in my ear,

Something I was dying to hear...

 

Your love does something to me

It makes me realize and see

That you were the one who put me in a trance

You made my day with this dreamy dance

 

We danced like no other

We adored one another

There is no day like then,

It was more of a one out of ten

 

Without you, there would be no me

you liked me because of who I wanted to be

Dancing in the moonlight,

It was just beautiful sight

 

Your love does something to me

It makes me realize and see

That you were the one who put me in a trance

You made my day with this dreamy dance

 

Created on: 9/17/08

(Note: Definatly not my best, but people were ranting at me to write a poem that rhymes, so here ya go.)

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On September 25th 2008 poemprincess Said :
poemprincess Wow this is your best I think...
On September 25th 2008 KinkyKyla Said :
KinkyKyla wow
On September 22nd 2008 Calypso32 Said :
Calypso32 rhyming, rhyming it's your forte. Great work, little bland, (try pumping it up a bit with new words, not just dance/trance/pants type thing) your style us great as it is, just my little preference.~L
On September 20th 2008 yeaitzJess Said :
yeaitzJess even if its not your best its still AMAZING. me & rhyming dont click. lol.
On September 19th 2008 mymyspacesux Said :
mymyspacesux wow this is fucking awsome!!
On September 19th 2008 ChristieSaya Said :
ChristieSaya :)
On September 18th 2008 UnSane420 Said :
UnSane420 this is amazing it did a good jog with the rhyming this poem is beautiful good work
On September 18th 2008 muse4apoem Said :
muse4apoem I think it is one of your best. I think it's beautiful! :) ~Kudos~
On September 18th 2008 kriskris222 Said :
kriskris222 Aww very sweet!
On September 17th 2008 5cheychey5 Said :
5cheychey5 i love it, very sweet. and for those who wanted you to rhyme, not all poems have to rhyme! lol. well, it was really nice, good job. :)
On September 17th 2008 AmberDawnnX Said :
AmberDawnnX this is good the rhymeing words were a little easy but if its your first try at it its pretty good. nice imagery too :D
On September 17th 2008 xXXxjuicyxXxXX Said :
xXXxjuicyxXxXX Your silly for thinking its not one of your best, its so good. I love the rhyming.
On September 17th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said :
xXPunkGirl09Xx This is so far beautiful! I love it! Wow! It is so touchy!
On September 17th 2008 KinkyKyla Said :
KinkyKyla i love it
On September 17th 2008 FireAngel420 Said :
FireAngel420 that was beautiful I love it
On September 17th 2008 counterpart Said :
counterpart i like it
On September 17th 2008 lalarubio23 Said :
lalarubio23 >.< i love this.
On September 17th 2008 mitchy8125 Said :
mitchy8125 I LOVE IT! I definately like rhyming poems better than ones that don't. Good job!
On September 17th 2008 tiffany1058 Said :
tiffany1058 i can hear this put in a song too its really lovely
On September 17th 2008 lovedaisy Said :
lovedaisy wow
On September 17th 2008 mydragonlord Said :
mydragonlord now this is really GOOD it flows beautifully and your wording was brilliantly chosen. Bravo!!! well done!! i can actually hear this in a song.