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Created on 9-30-08
Don't
By: xHickChick789x
Darlin', you know how much I care,
And you know how crazy I am about you,
It's just killin' me inside,
Every time I say "I love you,"
And you don't...
Don't blink,
You just might miss our love song
Don't move,
You might disturb the silence
Whatever you do, don't!
I know how dumb you think I am,
And I really don't care
You don't need to act this way
So you don't like me back?
Well, I'm really hurt...
Don't glance,
You just might view my gaze
Don't leave,
You might put me in pain
Whatever you do, don't!
We never talk,
We never wink,
We don't even give a wave,
It hurts me so,
But it doesn't to you...
Don't blink,
You just might miss our love song
Don't move,
You might disturb the silence
Don't glance,
You just might view my glance
Don't leave,
You might put me in pain
Whatever you do, don't!
It just might kill me more,
But what do you care?
Nothing at all
I know and you simply,
Don't!
Created on: 9/30/08
(NOTE: I wrote this dedicating it to one of my friends. I know it's not that good, but I wrote this sometime ago.)
Please Login to post comments| On November 9th 2008 chamaolie Said : | |
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i won't ever!!! i don't do that!!! that was awesome!! love it |
| On October 15th 2008 brokenScArLeT Said : | |
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that is a really good poem that could almost be a song lol it sounds kinda like one good job its wwwiiiikkkkaaaarrrddd!!!!!! |
| On October 15th 2008 brokenScArLeT Said : | |
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that is a really good poem that could almost be a song lol it sounds kinda like one good job its wwwiiiikkkkaaaarrrddd!!!!!! |
| On October 5th 2008 sixtiespixie Said : | |
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I really like it. It does seem lyrical. Sorry if it took a while. I subscribed too you for your poems~ so you don't have 2 leave comments. It's just taking me forever to get through my messages! :) |
| On October 5th 2008 KinkyKyla Said : | |
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omfg i lv it |
| On October 5th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said : | |
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Aww I love it. :) |
| On October 3rd 2008 poemprincess Said : | |
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:) |
| On October 3rd 2008 xXXxjuicyxXxXX Said : | |
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This is great. You should publish this. |
| On October 1st 2008 counterpart Said : | |
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this is good. |
| On October 1st 2008 Tiffiscool16 Said : | |
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cool |
| On October 1st 2008 Djshadownite Said : | |
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Wow that's really good |
| On October 1st 2008 lovedaisy Said : | |
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awwwwwwwwwww, that was tearjercking |
| On October 1st 2008 kissofasia Said : | |
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I loved it....very nice |
| On September 30th 2008 Exavolt1 Said : | |
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Wow.....very moving,i like it.....oh,btw- i just posted a new poem on here called the People's Cry.......if anyone is intrested,could you check it out?Thxs
-Sean |
| On September 30th 2008 101091 Said : | |
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I really like it. It says so much. |
| On September 30th 2008 vance4 Said : | |
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nice job... love it |
| On September 30th 2008 afunkysippycup Said : | |
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it has a messages |
| On September 30th 2008 toni2006 Said : | |
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i love it sounds like a really good song |
| On September 30th 2008 Calypso32 Said : | |
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It's ok, sort of bland, but the sentiment probably helped your friend, or at least I hope it did. Good job!~L |
| On September 30th 2008 lovin5life Said : | |
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exactly what i'm going through now...hate saying i love him but i really like him to know...dammit |
| On September 30th 2008 5cheychey5 Said : | |
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this is really neat! is this a song? |
| On September 30th 2008 StOlHiCo Said : | |
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i wuvs it |
| On September 30th 2008 ReneakaKC Said : | |
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this is really cute!!! I like it alot it's like a SONG!!! i like it!
4.5/5 stars from me |
| On September 30th 2008 RonHouse Said : | |
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Nice i really like it find someone who can sing but a soft beat behind it and this would sound amazing i really like it 5 stars |
| On September 30th 2008 megaeden Said : | |
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awsome, and i just saw it was a lyric |
