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Take Me Away
Take Me Away
By: xHickChick789x
Take me away, cowboy,
To a place where I've never been before
Take me far, far away,
To another world perhaps
Where ever you go,
I'll always be there by your side
I'll take this time to relax
And play our country music: loud and proud
Drink away the past; hello new life
It feels like the weekend,
Oh it just sounds so good
Take me away, cowboy,
Some where deep and unbelievable
Take me away from all this mess,
Just so I can clear my head
Where ever you go,
I hope to be there too
I'll take this time to relax And play our country music: loud and proud Drink away the past; hello new life It feels like the weekend, Oh it just sounds so good
Created on: 10/3/08
(note: Just a little something I thought of. I needed to post something different. It's a bit blah, but what do ya think?)
Please Login to post comments| On October 21st 2008 thuhchris Said: |
| I loved it. =] great. |
| On October 15th 2008 xHickChick789x Said: |
| Feels Like Yesterday: My latest poem I actually like for once. lol Check it out and tell me what ya think. It's always appreciate it even if I don't say it directly to you. :P |
| On October 10th 2008 xXXxjuicyxXxXX Said: |
| I like it, not blah at all.(: |
| On October 9th 2008 imnotgay90 Said: |
| that was good. u r like, my poetry hero! |
| On October 8th 2008 LNforever Said: |
| i mean WESTERN |
| On October 8th 2008 LNforever Said: |
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| OMG that is soooo weatern-like...i like totally luv it!!!! |
| On October 6th 2008 lovedaisy Said: |
| very good |
| On October 5th 2008 UnSane420 Said: |
| wow i really like this i've felt that way before sometimes i just want to go away for a while you did good on this! |
| On October 5th 2008 KinkyKyla Said: |
| lv it ♥ |
| On October 5th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said: |
| I love it!!! I can feel the song is playing in my mind! :) |
| On October 4th 2008 ialwayswrite Said: |
| love it, love the rythm, like how it talks about the weekend, it really rings true. |
| On October 4th 2008 lalarubio23 Said: |
| i really like it. good wording =) |
| On October 4th 2008 ArtemisStar Said: |
| I like it. Got a great country feel. |
| On October 4th 2008 Calypso32 Said: |
| It's ok, like your usual work though, you keep it consistent. Country and proud, nice to hear it. good write!~L |
| On October 3rd 2008 kriskris222 Said: |
| It soundz more like a song. But its good |
| On October 3rd 2008 poemprincess Said: |
| I love it, I love country :) |
| On October 3rd 2008 Exavolt1 Said: |
| It sounds like an old country song,i like it! |
| On October 3rd 2008 101091 Said: |
| Different, but good |
| On October 3rd 2008 muse4apoem Said: |
| Exactly my thoughts sounds like a song. Need some extra kick to it. Maybe you can make a second version to it if you want. |
| On October 3rd 2008 kassie94 Said: |
| i like it it sounds like a song |
| On October 3rd 2008 counterpart Said: |
| this is really good. |
| On October 3rd 2008 5cheychey5 Said: |
| i liked it. it was pretty cool. it is supposed to be a country song? |
