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Baby I'm cryin' and inside I'm dyin'.

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Created: 10/15 2008
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Category: Lyric

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Feels Like Yesterday

Feels Like Yesterday

By: xHickChick789x

~I never really realized how much I missed him until I thought back to those years.~

It was a dark, cold morning in September,

As I was wishing for a better life

I have always felt this way ever since I left him

It wasn't like I wanted to do it

Cause I never would have tried to attempt it

It's all my fault.

 

Chorus:

Baby I'm cryin' and inside I'm dyin'.

No fate to hold back these salty tears,

All I can do is face my fears

I can't stay behind,

Or I'll be lost out of my mind

There is nothing I can do, to keep him away

Man, it feels like yesterday

 

~I can't give up on him, even if it is the last thing I do.~

Soft and sorrowful he's deep in my soul

He's like another legend under the sea;

I love it when he holds me tight,

And he would never let go.

He's so loving and caring to me

I'll miss those days,

But there isn't a thing I can do to turn it around.

 

Chorus:

Baby I'm cryin' and inside I'm dyin'.

No fate to hold back these salty tears,

All I can do is face my fears

I can't stay behind,

Or I'll be lost out of my mind

There is nothing I can do, to keep him away

Man, it feels like yesterday

 

The dreadful days of the past

To the spiteful days of the future,

There is no way I will be able to fall for you again

Even if I would have broke my back to be with you before

There will never be a tomorrow for us,

Because I'll never relive yesterday.

 

Chorus:

Baby I'm cryin' and inside I'm dyin'.

No fate to hold back these salty tears,

All I can do is face my fears

I can't stay behind,

Or I'll be lost out of my mind

There is nothing I can do, to keep him away

Man, it feels like yesterday

 

Created on: 10/15/08

{NOTE: This one is actually probably my favorite so far. I know it still isn't the best, but I actually sort like this one, whether you think it or not. lol Let me know what you think though. Sorry I have posted anything in a while.}

 

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On November 18th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said: 
xXPunkGirl09Xx aww i love it!!!! gosh. :) I am sorry about how you feel. It's nothing we can do but only you can run and go back where you can walk to love again.
On October 28th 2008 laurita2010 Said: 
laurita2010 this is a really good poem keep up the good work
On October 26th 2008 afunkysippycup Said: 
afunkysippycup wow this is goood!
On October 24th 2008 derXluftbar Said: 
derXluftbar wow it's really good
On October 22nd 2008 brokenScArLeT Said: 
brokenScArLeT WOW!! thts just awesome!!! =))
On October 21st 2008 thuhchris Said: 
thuhchris that is amazing. i absolutly love it =]
On October 21st 2008 Angel2k11 Said: 
Angel2k11 this is wonderful....it is soo nice to hear from you again...and read your wonderful poems...they always take my breath away!!
On October 20th 2008 muse4apoem Said: 
muse4apoem I really missed your poems great comeback! :)
On October 19th 2008 101091 Said: 
101091 I love this. Very good.
On October 19th 2008 vance4 Said: 
vance4 i love it! your truly amazing !
On October 19th 2008 ReneakaKC Said: 
ReneakaKC awww this is freakin' amazing!!! I want to sing a duet with you we have to write something together and sing it! 'cause seriously u have like MAJOR TALENT!!!! =D
On October 17th 2008 RonHouse Said: 
RonHouse i wish i knew how to pst a video on here because i haver a guitar line that would go perfect with this FYI i loved it
On October 17th 2008 yeaitzJess Said: 
yeaitzJess i LOVE it, do you play it on your guitar?
On October 17th 2008 Griffin2400 Said: 
my picture
that would make a good song
On October 17th 2008 ArtemisStar Said: 
ArtemisStar So pretty. Would love to hear the melody.
On October 17th 2008 ChristieSaya Said: 
ChristieSaya great, i love this! keep it up!
On October 16th 2008 kriskris222 Said: 
kriskris222 Very good keep up the good work!
On October 16th 2008 jonsey3922 Said: 
jonsey3922 yes very good... keep writing!!
On October 16th 2008 kassie94 Said: 
kassie94 it's amazing it is one of my favorites great job hick
On October 16th 2008 lovedaisy Said: 
lovedaisy i was in tears, i cry way too much
On October 16th 2008 FireAngel420 Said: 
FireAngel420 That was beautiful it is one of your best
On October 16th 2008 gonzo4201 Said: 
gonzo4201 that was nice... I can understand why that would be a fave of yours... Very masterful...
On October 15th 2008 5cheychey5 Said: 
5cheychey5 i can relate. i really like it. pry my favorite from you so far. great job.
On October 15th 2008 toni2006 Said: 
toni2006 wow this was really good i love it
On October 15th 2008 TheKTGirl Said: 
TheKTGirl Wow that is definitely my favorite!! *Thumbs up* amazing job!!