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Feels Like Yesterday
Feels Like Yesterday
By: xHickChick789x
~I never really realized how much I missed him until I thought back to those years.~
It was a dark, cold morning in September,
As I was wishing for a better life
I have always felt this way ever since I left him
It wasn't like I wanted to do it
Cause I never would have tried to attempt it
It's all my fault.
Chorus:
Baby I'm cryin' and inside I'm dyin'.
No fate to hold back these salty tears,
All I can do is face my fears
I can't stay behind,
Or I'll be lost out of my mind
There is nothing I can do, to keep him away
Man, it feels like yesterday
~I can't give up on him, even if it is the last thing I do.~
Soft and sorrowful he's deep in my soul
He's like another legend under the sea;
I love it when he holds me tight,
And he would never let go.
He's so loving and caring to me
I'll miss those days,
But there isn't a thing I can do to turn it around.
Chorus: Baby I'm cryin' and inside I'm dyin'. No fate to hold back these salty tears, All I can do is face my fears I can't stay behind, Or I'll be lost out of my mind There is nothing I can do, to keep him away Man, it feels like yesterday
The dreadful days of the past To the spiteful days of the future, There is no way I will be able to fall for you again Even if I would have broke my back to be with you before There will never be a tomorrow for us, Because I'll never relive yesterday.
Chorus:
Baby I'm cryin' and inside I'm dyin'.
No fate to hold back these salty tears,
All I can do is face my fears
I can't stay behind,
Or I'll be lost out of my mind
There is nothing I can do, to keep him away
Man, it feels like yesterday
Created on: 10/15/08
{NOTE: This one is actually probably my favorite so far. I know it still isn't the best, but I actually sort like this one, whether you think it or not. lol Let me know what you think though. Sorry I have posted anything in a while.}
| On November 18th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said: |
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| aww i love it!!!! gosh. :) I am sorry about how you feel. It's nothing we can do but only you can run and go back where you can walk to love again. |
| On October 28th 2008 laurita2010 Said: |
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| this is a really good poem keep up the good work |
| On October 26th 2008 afunkysippycup Said: |
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| wow this is goood! |
| On October 24th 2008 derXluftbar Said: |
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| wow it's really good |
| On October 22nd 2008 brokenScArLeT Said: |
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| WOW!! thts just awesome!!! =)) |
| On October 21st 2008 thuhchris Said: |
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| that is amazing. i absolutly love it =] |
| On October 21st 2008 Angel2k11 Said: |
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| this is wonderful....it is soo nice to hear from you again...and read your wonderful poems...they always take my breath away!!
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| On October 20th 2008 muse4apoem Said: |
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| I really missed your poems great comeback! :) |
| On October 19th 2008 101091 Said: |
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| I love this. Very good. |
| On October 19th 2008 vance4 Said: |
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| i love it! your truly amazing ! |
| On October 19th 2008 ReneakaKC Said: |
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| awww
this is freakin' amazing!!!
I want to sing a duet with you
we have to write something together
and sing it! 'cause seriously
u have like MAJOR TALENT!!!! =D |
| On October 17th 2008 RonHouse Said: |
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| i wish i knew how to pst a video on here because i haver a guitar line that would go perfect with this FYI i loved it |
| On October 17th 2008 yeaitzJess Said: |
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| i LOVE it, do you play it on your guitar? |
| On October 17th 2008 Griffin2400 Said: |
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| that would make a good song
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| On October 17th 2008 ArtemisStar Said: |
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| So pretty. Would love to hear the melody. |
| On October 17th 2008 ChristieSaya Said: |
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| great, i love this! keep it up! |
| On October 16th 2008 kriskris222 Said: |
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| Very good keep up the good work! |
| On October 16th 2008 jonsey3922 Said: |
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| yes very good... keep writing!! |
| On October 16th 2008 kassie94 Said: |
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| it's amazing
it is one of my favorites
great job hick |
| On October 16th 2008 lovedaisy Said: |
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| i was in tears, i cry way too much |
| On October 16th 2008 FireAngel420 Said: |
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| That was beautiful it is one of your best |
| On October 16th 2008 gonzo4201 Said: |
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| that was nice... I can understand why that would be a fave of yours... Very masterful... |
| On October 15th 2008 5cheychey5 Said: |
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| i can relate. i really like it. pry my favorite from you so far. great job. |
| On October 15th 2008 toni2006 Said: |
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| wow this was really good i love it |
| On October 15th 2008 TheKTGirl Said: |
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| Wow that is definitely my favorite!! *Thumbs up* amazing job!! |


