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Changing lanes, watching airplanesRate this Poem
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Created:
10/24 2008
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336
Category:
Passion
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Lonely
Lonely
Created by: xHickChick789x
...Changing lanes, watching airplanes,
Something I can do on alone time
I sit back, my energy begins to lack
And I immediately relax.
Sunsets, days reset,
I'm lost in bordom
Star gazing, moonlight dazing
It makes me smile every evening
Windy days, colorful rays,
Of the sun shine down upon me
Beautiful beaches, golden ripe peaches,
Makes me feel good, even if I am still lonely...
Created on: 10/24/08
(Note: I know it's probably not the best, but it popped in my mind this morning. What do you think?)
Please Login to post comments| On December 1st 2008 kjoy428 Said: |
| wow! i absolutely love this!!! this is real talent! amazing!!!! |
| On November 18th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said: |
| awww i love it :) |
| On November 16th 2008 menomosso11 Said: |
| that is really pretty |
| On October 30th 2008 kissofasia Said: |
| So beautiful. It sounds beautiful and sad at the same time...nice |
| On October 30th 2008 jonsey3922 Said: |
| Say´s a lot in all the right ways... if that makes sense, but it makes sense to me |
| On October 29th 2008 ReneakaKC Said: |
| awww a GOOD way to say I'm ok being alone!
I LOVE IT!!! GREAT JOB!!!! =D |
| On October 28th 2008 Exavolt1 Said: |
| Wow......its really good!Hey,Can you guys do me a favor and check out my other poems for me and rate them?Thxs |
| On October 28th 2008 Angel2k11 Said: |
| sister.........you are one of the best poets i have ever met.
i'm soooo glad that your my sister!!!!!!
this is just beautiful...it captures innocence and bliss.....i love it
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| On October 27th 2008 Calypso32 Said: |
| I like it!! this one is unlike your others in that it has a hint of whimsy in it, your phrasing is well patterened and none of this rhyming scheme, Rather refreshing, great job!~L |
| On October 27th 2008 UnSane420 Said: |
| wow this is awesome i really like this good work! |
| On October 25th 2008 FireAngel420 Said: |
| I like it and can relate to it |
| On October 25th 2008 Djshadownite Said: |
| REally nice. I like it =) |
| On October 24th 2008 derXluftbar Said: |
| i feel like that right now |
| On October 24th 2008 SummerxCyanide Said: |
| nie |
| On October 24th 2008 kriskris222 Said: |
| Nice |
| On October 24th 2008 5cheychey5 Said: |
| i like it, it makes you think and appreciate the small things |
| On October 24th 2008 lalarubio23 Said: |
| this reminds me of a dream i had lol
love it |
| On October 24th 2008 muse4apoem Said: |
| I like it. It puts you in a dreamland. :) |
| On October 24th 2008 poemprincess Said: |
| I really like it I love the way you worded everything! |
| On October 24th 2008 lovedaisy Said: |
| i felt this and of course i loved it |
| On October 24th 2008 RonHouse Said: |
| for just throwing this toegher its pretty good id say |
| On October 24th 2008 counterpart Said: |
| yay! i love it!! |
| On October 24th 2008 piratesrule78 Said: |
| i really luv it awsome job |
| On October 24th 2008 TheKTGirl Said: |
| I love it! It's actually really good - I like it a lot! *thumbs up* =D |
| On October 24th 2008 d0icount Said: |
| I really love it. =) BEST poem I've read on here for awhile. |
