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Achy Breaky Heart
Achy Breaky Heart
By: xHickChick789x
Take a look into my eyes
And tell me everything will be alright
But I know it's not.
I waste my time suffering
And being filled up with misery
My heart and soul is breaking
And my poor mind is aching.
All I can think about is our past,
And it's ripping me apart inside,
Every inch of it...
Times flown by over the years
And it's been wasted away to nothing.
As much as I want to say "I love you,"
It won't do me much good.
I still have that achy breaky heart...
As much as I am crying,
As much as I feeling like dying,
I wonder, why bother?
You have probably moved on
And yet I'm stuck with this achy breaky heart...
If I moved on too, my life would be better
I wouldn't be in this rut I am today
And say "Hello new life"
And say good-bye achy breaky heart
I'd be living a better life...
Created on: 10/29/08
Please Login to post comments| On November 21st 2008 Lovelyeyes0 Said: |
| For a deceased friend...
Please... Go read this, and give me feedback... .
Mourning...
Please Read, Rate, and Comment?
I'm whoring this as a tribute to her... Downvote it if you wish. Don't really care. |
| On November 18th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said: |
| this is so far beautiful written. It's hard to move on...and I completely understand. It's not going to be easy but as long as you just can hang out with your family and friends to forget. It's not going to be easy. Yes, I know. WOW.. it's so sad... lol yeah. |
| On November 15th 2008 rosiegirl24 Said: |
| wow kay...ur just amazing haha |
| On November 13th 2008 ShortiGirly Said: |
| AMAZINGG |
| On November 4th 2008 ChristieSaya Said: |
| amazing! |
| On November 3rd 2008 UnSane420 Said: |
| awesome job this poem is truly amazing! |
| On November 3rd 2008 laurita2010 Said: |
| very very good |
| On November 1st 2008 RonHouse Said: |
| Very nice |
| On November 1st 2008 vance4 Said: |
| i love it great job! |
| On October 31st 2008 lovedaisy Said: |
| its like you took the words out of ma mouth and composed them beautifully and it feels like u feel the pain too. anyway i love it and the background is amazing, it goes well with the poem |
| On October 30th 2008 kissofasia Said: |
| I have to read yours, i realize you did a lot when i was gone....I feel for you in this poem....very nicely done...love the background |
| On October 30th 2008 kriskris222 Said: |
| Like it. You're a really good writer keep it up! |
| On October 30th 2008 derXluftbar Said: |
| i like the idea, but i don't think it flows well... besides that it's good |
| On October 30th 2008 Angel2k11 Said: |
| its beautiful, sister!!
i love it!!
i wish i was as good as you!!!!
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| On October 29th 2008 d0icount Said: |
| i |
| On October 29th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said: |
| getting over a love is most difficult at times. great read |
| On October 29th 2008 5cheychey5 Said: |
| aww, this is so sad. i like it...not because its sad, just because its good. lol. |
| On October 29th 2008 toni2006 Said: |
| wow this was really good i love it |
| On October 29th 2008 MZdaBoSs Said: |
| Wow I love That. |
| On October 29th 2008 piratesrule78 Said: |
| that is really good awsome job |
| On October 29th 2008 TheKTGirl Said: |
| Aw that's deep :( I love it! |
| On October 29th 2008 Calypso32 Said: |
| it's a good thought, time to move on, though one is never sure just what the second part to the story might ever be. Life is too short for regrets, pay them their dues, but learn to love where you are, it's more fun that rejecting happiness now for a moment then. Great work, rather insightful.~L |
| On October 29th 2008 muse4apoem Said: |
| It is hard to move on when you really love someone. :( Good job. |
| On October 29th 2008 stef4732 Said: |
| Awh so sad but i love it |
| On October 29th 2008 poemprincess Said: |
| this is good :) |
