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And tell me you never loved me

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Created: 12/01 2008
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Category: Pain

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Bullet in My Heart

Bullet in My Heart

By: xHickChick789x

... The day I thought we were going to be forever, seemed to turn into a never ever...

Back when I was invincible, and predictable,

I felt like everthing would be okay,

But nothing would be okay,

Because he is gone-

 

If you can look into my eyes,

And tell me you never loved me,

Then I'll walk away, and never speak of it again.

It's like you tried your hardest,

To put a bullet in my heart.

If you thought you saw me smiling on the outside,

I know you hadn't seen me dying instead,

He left me there hanging; I felt like I was dangling,

For dear life-

 

If you can look into my eyes,

And tell me you never loved me,

Then I'll walk away, and never speak of it again.

It's like you tried your hardest,

To put a bullet in my heart.

It is not what I wanted,

It ain't gonna be all right,

Since you pulled that trigger,

And put the bullet in my heart,

Just so you know...

 

If you can look into my eyes,

And tell me you never loved me,

Then I'll walk away, and never speak of it again.

It's like you tried your hardest,

To put a bullet in my heart.

-To pull that trigger and put a bullet in my heart

Created on: 12/1/08

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On January 2nd 2009 lovedaisy Said: 
lovedaisy awwwwwwwwww so sad
On December 18th 2008 kcbsdjchfbusgd Said: 
kcbsdjchfbusgd really awesome i like this one
On December 14th 2008 TheKTGirl Said: 
TheKTGirl A little bit of repetition for a poem (like I should talk, tho =P) but it'd make a great song. Is that how you planned it? (if you could answer via message I'd appreciate it :)
On December 13th 2008 5cheychey5 Said: 
5cheychey5 so sad...good job though. great use of feeling
On December 12th 2008 laurita2010 Said: 
laurita2010 luv it so much soul and emotion in it...
On December 6th 2008 Angel2k11 Said: 
Angel2k11 sis this is gorgeous. wow.... i'm dumbfounded
On December 5th 2008 transgenic Said: 
transgenic I love it. Good choice of words and I like the formatting, too.
On December 5th 2008 MZdaBoSs Said: 
MZdaBoSs Wow this is amazing. I Love it
On December 4th 2008 UnSane420 Said: 
UnSane420 wow this is amazing i love the different text styles this poem is wonderful good job
On December 3rd 2008 specialk107 Said: 
specialk107 realy good, and i know that feeling, it blows but its something that can heal over time, sides, things happen so we can become stronger from them, and so far this one is my fave
On December 3rd 2008 KCbby67 Said: 
KCbby67 this is really good I like it:)
On December 3rd 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said: 
xXPunkGirl09Xx this is what i used to feel before like you feel this way right now. It's really hard. I understand...but I honesty love this poem. :) I hope you feel better. If you need to talk, I will be there. :)
On December 3rd 2008 muse4apoem Said: 
muse4apoem This is really great the first paragraph is outstanding. Good work as usual.
On December 2nd 2008 imnotgay90 Said: 
imnotgay90 that was really good. u r so awesome at this poetry stuff.
On December 2nd 2008 FireAngel420 Said: 
FireAngel420 that was sad but I liked it
On December 2nd 2008 deshanna13 Said: 
deshanna13 aw.i like it.i feel like that sometimes.
On December 2nd 2008 RonHouse Said: 
RonHouse i like it though
On December 2nd 2008 RonHouse Said: 
RonHouse It seemed like there was alot of emotion behind this peice
On December 2nd 2008 poemprincess Said: 
poemprincess Wow That's sad :(
On December 2nd 2008 kissofasia Said: 
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loved the message of this....I'd like to hear this in a song....Great job...and i don't feel tired or bothered at all of you asking a favor coz you know i ask you the same in return...lol I'd like you to check my poems "Sleepless Soul" and "Fear of the Unknown". I'm not as good as you but i try...You don't really have to make a comment, the votes would do just fine...thanks in advance and Have a nice day... xoxo.....
On December 2nd 2008 chamaolie Said: 
chamaolie that's deep... but awesome!! i loved it 0_o
On December 2nd 2008 menomosso11 Said: 
menomosso11 wow. that is awesome. :D
On December 2nd 2008 ChristieSaya Said: 
ChristieSaya amazing.. it's like i can read what's inside your heart..
On December 1st 2008 vance4 Said: 
vance4 this is amazing love it!
On December 1st 2008 littlesis18 Said: 
littlesis18 i really like this