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But now that I messed up the past

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Created: 12/09 2008
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Category: Lyric

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I Can't Say Yes

I Can't Say Yes

By: xHickChick789x

 

The first time we met,

I just thought you were nice,

Nothing else.

 

When I first looked into your eyes,

I actually felt a connection,

That's true...

 

I just want you to know,

That whatever happens in the future,

You will always be close to my heart, always.

I can never forget about you,

No matter what my friends say.

But now that I messed up the past,

I can't say yes...

When I noticed you for the first time; over a year ago,

I realized how much I had missed you,

Yes I did, oh woah.

 

Then when I saw you walk away for the first time,

I broke down, with tears streaming down my face,

I couldn't help it...

 

I just want you to know,

That whatever happens in the future,

You will always be close to my heart, always.

I can never forget about you,

No matter what my friends say.

But now that I messed up the past,

I can't say yes...

Somethings never change,

But for us I know it has.

I know that we probably won't be together

But I know you will always here to me,

Even if I'm not to you - oh woah!

 

I just want you to know,

That whatever happens in the future,

You will always be close to my heart, always.

I can never forget about you,

No matter what my friends say.

But now that I messed up the past,

I can't say yes...

Created on: 12/9/08

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On August 25th 2009 gaia17 Said: 
gaia17 i can feel the emotions. it's wonderful!
On January 2nd 2009 lovedaisy Said: 
lovedaisy wow
On December 27th 2008 ruskiya Said: 
ruskiya wow totally LOVE it!
On December 13th 2008 5cheychey5 Said: 
5cheychey5 great work. nice words. like the chorus. great job.
On December 12th 2008 UnSane420 Said: 
UnSane420 this is amazing i like this a whole bunch its wonderful good work!
On December 11th 2008 imnotgay90 Said: 
imnotgay90 u r so good at this poetry thing. im gonna subscribe.
On December 11th 2008 xHickChick789x Said: 
xHickChick789x In response to chamaolie: To the guy actually feel for. I screwed up the past. He doesn't even remember me anymore. :'(
On December 10th 2008 chamaolie Said: 
chamaolie can't say yes to what exactly? this reminds me of when i moved and left my lover behind... good one!!
On December 10th 2008 muse4apoem Said: 
muse4apoem Excellent work!;)
On December 10th 2008 toni2006 Said: 
toni2006 i loved it very well written and filled with such emotion btw cool background
On December 10th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said: 
xXPunkGirl09Xx Wow, I seriously love it. This is beautifully written in the lyric. I totally love it. It kinda relates to me but not much. ツ
On December 10th 2008 ChristieSaya Said: 
ChristieSaya I really like this. Simple yet nice!
On December 9th 2008 Loves2Dance95 Said: 
Loves2Dance95 That poem is great. I loved it. And I an kinda relate 2 what U said. I give it 5 stars.
On December 9th 2008 vance4 Said: 
vance4 This is beautifully written ...... i love it you can feel the emotion! Great Job
On December 9th 2008 transgenic Said: 
transgenic Beautifully written. The emotion really comes through.
On December 9th 2008 Djshadownite Said: 
Djshadownite Wow that's really good. I agree with the luving the background thing ^^ Such a good lyricist (if that ain't a word yet, I just made it one x) )
On December 9th 2008 KIRKME Said: 
KIRKME nice luv the background :]
On December 9th 2008 xHickChick789x Said: 
xHickChick789x grr it's messed up the form of the song. grr lol oh well. Tell me what cha think!