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08/28 2009
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Anger
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"nevermore" is the place in my mind set for you
"i'll forget" is the dream that never comes true
Peaceful sleep is my longing and the one thing for I pray
no more tears and a quiet heart at the end of each day
but you come back to your haunting, like my soul is the place
where your bitterness and anger can claim a face
and my pleading won't do, it falls on deaf ears
and my eyes plead too with their unending tears
but you can't be bribed with my sorrow and pain
you search my soul for something to gain
you leave me again feeling unwanted and lost
blacker than night, colder than frost
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| Wow... This left me speechless... GREAT JOB. |
| On December 23rd 2009 alycendoes Said: |
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| that was absolutely fantastic. I loved it. |
| On October 12th 2009 koto1414 Said: |
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| Its really good write more your amazing at it |
| On September 7th 2009 Blueeyedgirl92 Said: |
| On September 1st 2009 mern13 Said: |
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| It was very pretty in a dark way. I liked it alot=] |
| On September 1st 2009 lizyluvsyou Said: |
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| wow , Thats like amazing(: |
| On August 30th 2009 fadedaway Said: |
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| nicee this is amazing. |
| On August 29th 2009 VampireKat63 Said: |
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| holy S h i t ur really good at this u should be like a um poet yeah thats what i was thinking lol WRITE MOREE!!!! |
| On August 29th 2009 StreaKing Said: |
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| wow. i relle like it alot. |
| On August 29th 2009 Mokasan534 Said: |
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| wow so deep. deeper then my poems. Your so good! |
| On August 29th 2009 Karlyanne12 Said: |
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| Wowness. I adore it. Keep it up. Its amazing work :)
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| On August 29th 2009 Trinity1415 Said: |
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| Wow! Dis is good! Keep it up! xD |
| On August 29th 2009 Ranoah Said: |
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| :)
That is amazing!
Fantastic job!
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