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Created: 07/26 2007
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Category: Pain

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Lost

Remember the day we first met

And we shared our first kiss

Remember the sparks

Shooting through our veins

Like thousands of tiny lightning bolts

The way it felt when we held hands

Your warm skin against mine

Feeling as if we could face the world

Just the two of us

Remember the way you touched my cheek

Your hand so soft and warm

And that look in your eyes as you did

Like you never wanted to let me go

Remember the way we hugged

And held each other as tight as we could

Cause it was just easier that way

Easier than letting go

Easier than falling apart

Remember how in love you said you were

And all the promises that you’d never leave

All those wishes we had for the future

Remember just going to the park together

Just to be there with each other

And the long drives home that seemed

Way too quick cause they were gone so fast

Remember that look you gave me

Every time you said I love you

And every time you did

Your voice would change

And I could tell you really cared

Remember all the nights we spent

Just staring at each other

All the hours we spent talking nonstop

Even when there was barely anything to say

Remember all those times and tell me

How did this happen?

Remember all those things

Why did they disappear so fast?

And the together forever

Gone as fast as it came

Now it’s too late

And there’s nothing left

I want to save us

I’m trying so hard

I need your help

Remember me

Help me

I don’t know how

Just please help

Pull me out of this mess

Save me

Care for me

Trust me 

Do anything

As long as

You love me

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On July 18th 2009 girlzrock2008 Said: 
girlzrock2008 awsome! i wish i could write like that.
On August 14th 2007 SM2112 Said: 
SM2112 Very Good has just so much meanin powerfull I love it.
On August 4th 2007 jimbob1432 Said: 
jimbob1432 very good poem. i like the style.
On July 28th 2007 Javellef Said: 
Javellef Your words are full of feeling. Great work!
On July 27th 2007 Hollehmariee Said: 
Hollehmariee well done, really powerful... your really talented =] x
On July 27th 2007 Carcer Said: 
Carcer brb, just gonna slit my wrists. lol nah its really good, good poetic structure....it suits the poem's topic
On July 27th 2007 angelofwar4 Said: 
angelofwar4 Awesome work! I understand how that feels - but even through all this pain there is hope for the future, heart do mend & heal. Good Job, very expressive.
On July 27th 2007 lisajoann88 Said: 
lisajoann88 i love it!
On July 27th 2007 inlovewithc17 Said: 
inlovewithc17 its so sweet and meaningful so powerful!!!!!
On July 27th 2007 mrskritter Said: 
mrskritter great work