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Lost
Remember the day we first met
And we shared our first kiss
Remember the sparks
Shooting through our veins
Like thousands of tiny lightning bolts
The way it felt when we held hands
Your warm skin against mine
Feeling as if we could face the world
Just the two of us
Remember the way you touched my cheek
Your hand so soft and warm
And that look in your eyes as you did
Like you never wanted to let me go
Remember the way we hugged
And held each other as tight as we could
Cause it was just easier that way
Easier than letting go
Easier than falling apart
Remember how in love you said you were
And all the promises that you’d never leave
All those wishes we had for the future
Remember just going to the park together
Just to be there with each other
And the long drives home that seemed
Way too quick cause they were gone so fast
Remember that look you gave me
Every time you said I love you
And every time you did
Your voice would change
And I could tell you really cared
Remember all the nights we spent
Just staring at each other
All the hours we spent talking nonstop
Even when there was barely anything to say
Remember all those times and tell me
How did this happen?
Remember all those things
Why did they disappear so fast?
And the together forever
Gone as fast as it came
Now it’s too late
And there’s nothing left
I want to save us
I’m trying so hard
I need your help
Remember me
Help me
I don’t know how
Just please help
Pull me out of this mess
Save me
Care for me
Trust me
Do anything
As long as
You love me
| On July 18th 2009 girlzrock2008 Said: |
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| awsome! i wish i could write like that. |
| On August 14th 2007 SM2112 Said: |
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| Very Good has just so much meanin powerfull I love it. |
| On August 4th 2007 jimbob1432 Said: |
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| very good poem. i like the style. |
| On July 28th 2007 Javellef Said: |
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| Your words are full of feeling. Great work! |
| On July 27th 2007 Hollehmariee Said: |
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| well done, really powerful... your really talented =] x |
| On July 27th 2007 Carcer Said: |
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| brb, just gonna slit my wrists. lol nah its really good, good poetic structure....it suits the poem's topic |
| On July 27th 2007 angelofwar4 Said: |
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| Awesome work! I understand how that feels - but even through all this pain there is hope for the future, heart do mend & heal. Good Job, very expressive. |
| On July 27th 2007 lisajoann88 Said: |
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| i love it! |
| On July 27th 2007 inlovewithc17 Said: |
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| its so sweet and meaningful so powerful!!!!! |
| On July 27th 2007 mrskritter Said: |
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| great work |


