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Cello
Something happens inside me
As the bow touches down
The metal of the strings give way
And produce a glorious sound
A vibration flows through the wood
A sound that is velvety soft
And everything that I was taught
Floats away with the waves
None of it matters
As I press myself into the instrument
My heart flowing into the music
My life coming out in notes and chords
And I’m not thinking of scales
Or patterns
I’m not thinking of anything
A beautiful feeling runs through me
My heart stopping
Like falling in love over and over again
I can’t breathe
The intensity overcomes me
And I am one with the instrument
And the songs I play are me
And the feelings, the meanings, are mine
The notes climb together
Higher and higher
The climax awaiting
And then springing to life
And I am that climax
I am those notes going higher
Telling stories through sound alone
I feel alive, excited, something amazing
A feeling I have never felt
Before this moment
And then the end comes
A slow solemn note
And that note is me too
Saying goodbye
And the bow comes off the strings
The audience applauds
And with cello in my hand
I leave the stage
A calm feeling overwhelming me
The instrument shines in the light
And it is more beautiful than any person
More beautiful than life itself
Because it is life
It is my life
And I am its
We are one
Author's Note: Sorry it's kind of weird... I'm tired and not feeling well... But that's how I do feel about my cello... :)
| On November 30th 2008 XXFictitiousXX Said: |
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| lol maybe i should pick up cello :P... IT BUILT AND BUILT AND BUILT and in a matter of seconds it was over...NICE:P |
| On May 8th 2008 JLBHawk Said: |
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| it is pretty amazing
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| On March 7th 2008 BUrSelf112189 Said: |
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| i love music and playing the cello!~ |
| On January 19th 2008 oceanbluebook Said: |
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| very powerful..♥ it |
| On December 19th 2007 TheDragonwitch Said: |
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| Beatifull explanation of how your soul and creativity leave the normal bounds of our limitations becoming so much more than we know. Stunning!! |
| On December 3rd 2007 mydragonlord Said: |
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| Weired? definatly not! beautiful? Absolutly stuning!!! |
| On November 30th 2007 KimSmallwood Said: |
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| Amazing. Exactly how I feel when I play my cello. |
| On October 10th 2007 7unicornrings Said: |
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| wow! neato! =D its so cool how u wrote a poem about ur cello! hehe..i like it! |
| On September 11th 2007 Emylinda Said: |
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| Absolutely BEAUTIFUL! Not weird at all. I seriously don't get this site, most of the highest rated poems are crap. This, on the other hand, is art. |
| On September 11th 2007 espii Said: |
| On August 28th 2007 loradoman Said: |
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| Kind if weird? Not at all. That is one of the best descriptions of the feeling of connecting with an instrument. I like it. It makes me want to play. |
| On August 23rd 2007 HRHHermione Said: |
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| Ditto here...It's like you and the cello just blend and suddenly you're playing your heart...Excuse me, I need to go play now... |
| On August 7th 2007 SM2112 Said: |
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| I love this It's just like how I feel when I play the cello. |


