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Created: 08/07 2007
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Category: Love

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Cello

Something happens inside me

As the bow touches down

The metal of the strings give way

And produce a glorious sound

A vibration flows through the wood

A sound that is velvety soft

And everything that I was taught

Floats away with the waves

None of it matters

As I press myself into the instrument

My heart flowing into the music

My life coming out in notes and chords

And I’m not thinking of scales

Or patterns

I’m not thinking of anything

A beautiful feeling runs through me

My heart stopping

Like falling in love over and over again

I can’t breathe

The intensity overcomes me

And I am one with the instrument

And the songs I play are me

And the feelings, the meanings, are mine

The notes climb together

Higher and higher

The climax awaiting

And then springing to life

And I am that climax

I am those notes going higher

Telling stories through sound alone

I feel alive, excited, something amazing

A feeling I have never felt

Before this moment

And then the end comes

A slow solemn note

And that note is me too

Saying goodbye

And the bow comes off the strings

The audience applauds

And with cello in my hand

I leave the stage

A calm feeling overwhelming me

The instrument shines in the light

And it is more beautiful than any person

More beautiful than life itself

Because it is life

It is my life

And I am its

We are one

 

 

 

Author's Note: Sorry it's kind of weird... I'm tired and not feeling well... But that's how I do feel about my cello... :) 

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On November 30th 2008 XXFictitiousXX Said: 
XXFictitiousXX lol maybe i should pick up cello :P... IT BUILT AND BUILT AND BUILT and in a matter of seconds it was over...NICE:P
On May 8th 2008 JLBHawk Said: 
my picture
it is pretty amazing
On March 7th 2008 BUrSelf112189 Said: 
BUrSelf112189 i love music and playing the cello!~
On January 19th 2008 oceanbluebook Said: 
oceanbluebook very powerful..♥ it
On December 19th 2007 TheDragonwitch Said: 
TheDragonwitch Beatifull explanation of how your soul and creativity leave the normal bounds of our limitations becoming so much more than we know. Stunning!!
On December 3rd 2007 mydragonlord Said: 
mydragonlord Weired? definatly not! beautiful? Absolutly stuning!!!
On November 30th 2007 KimSmallwood Said: 
KimSmallwood Amazing. Exactly how I feel when I play my cello.
On October 10th 2007 7unicornrings Said: 
7unicornrings wow! neato! =D its so cool how u wrote a poem about ur cello! hehe..i like it!
On September 11th 2007 Emylinda Said: 
Emylinda Absolutely BEAUTIFUL! Not weird at all. I seriously don't get this site, most of the highest rated poems are crap. This, on the other hand, is art.
On September 11th 2007 espii Said: 
espii dude. i think this is way better than some of the ones that seem to have been "ranked" higher. of course.... i don't think half the people on would know good poetry unless it smacked them in the face and said "the cat in the hat." a lot of "I", though. much of it just excess explanation. but i really felt you on this one. very very nice.
On August 28th 2007 loradoman Said: 
loradoman Kind if weird? Not at all. That is one of the best descriptions of the feeling of connecting with an instrument. I like it. It makes me want to play.
On August 23rd 2007 HRHHermione Said: 
HRHHermione Ditto here...It's like you and the cello just blend and suddenly you're playing your heart...Excuse me, I need to go play now...
On August 7th 2007 SM2112 Said: 
SM2112 I love this It's just like how I feel when I play the cello.