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a poem of fearRate this Poem
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Created:
07/13 2007
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953
Category:
Haiku
My Poems
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Silence |
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Dad's Accident |
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Christian |
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Love Is... |
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His Only Love |
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Together Forever |
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Walking Alone |
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Worthless |
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120
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My Best Friend |
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Pulling The Trigger |
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143
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Don't Give Up |
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82
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Falling Apart |
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99
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Dancing In The Rain |
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Just For You |
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Going To Hell - Cheater |
Not Alone
The eggs are hatching now
In the distance, where the tree lies
We are no longer alone
Author's Note: My first few tries at Haiku's... Tell me what you think, give advice... and check out my other two posted tonight!
Please Login to post comments| On April 9th 2008 SomeGirl38 Said: |
| i think ur a little confused but i like its good the ones i did were kinda wierd lol |
| On March 28th 2008 XxbloodstainxX Said: |
| It's 5-7-5 sylabals, not words. |
| On January 30th 2008 iLvJsus675699 Said: |
| it's pkay. you're just a little confused. it's 5-7-5 sylables, not 5-7-5 words. still, it's nice. i'm horrible at haiku. |
| On July 22nd 2007 JaziMae2 Said: |
| It's to long. You fucked up the syllables. |
| On July 15th 2007 Byrnesrebel Said: |
| haiku's confuse me. i never did like them. but this one is awesome. good job |
| On July 14th 2007 Carcer Said: |
| well done, Haiku's can be tricky at first but you did a good job =] |
| On July 14th 2007 guffa78 Said: |
| pretty good....keep practicing |
| On July 14th 2007 mrskritter Said: |
| nice |
| On July 13th 2007 Javellef Said: |
| I love it. You should be counting syllables instead of words. Haiku is a great writing style. It forces you to show your creativity in just a few words. You have mastered the art of saying a lot in just a few words. |
| On July 13th 2007 ivy81 Said: |
| i love haikus but people on this site dont really seem to like them lol sorry to tell you this but off on your count it should be 5-7-5 you have 6-8-7 |
| On July 13th 2007 angelofwar4 Said: |
| Good job, Haiku's are not easy! |
| On July 13th 2007 Jeremy062902 Said: |
| I am new to this style as well, but I thought it was 5 then 7 then 5 syllables again. Here you have 6-8-7. Not trying to nit-pick just trying to understand if you know something I don't? =) |
| On July 13th 2007 inlovewithc17 Said: |
| well......idk i mean i guess its good these just arent my favorite kind of poems so i guess its ok...i mean i like it i just like the other styles better!!! |
