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A tad morbid/sad. You might even cry.Rate this Poem
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Suicidal Boy
Suicidal Boy
Greetings to the darling boy
standing on the brick wall
be careful, watch your step
don’t want to see you fall
you look down at the ground
a purpose is in your eyes
you shuffle your feet in anticipation
will you fulfill the plan you devised?
what are you thinking now?
how bad is your constant strife?
you think you ran out of hope
and want to end your life
you start to take a step forward
face full of remorse and sorrow
you think suicide is the answer
yet you want to be alive till ‘morrow
You step back, your thoughts shift
boy, make up your mind
you think about your life’s past
what are you trying to find?
tears of sadness start to descend
the decision has been made
with your stubborn mind set
all obvious logic starts to fade
You quickly step off the edge
regret starts to fill your head
your last thought was to save yourself
but it’s too late, now you’re dead
©2007 KBH
Please Login to post comments| On January 30th 2008 leelee35055 Said: |
| i reallyyy like this.
with the emoness.
and all of that stuff.
it's veryyy emotional♥.
that's what i love ab it.
love --
XXlexyXX |
| On January 23rd 2008 imanemogirl Said: |
| it's so emo.i know emo.i am emo.if i didn't have such big plans ahead,i would kill myself. |
| On September 4th 2007 Bones37 Said: |
| This is great!!! Keep them coming.... |
| On August 29th 2007 DrizzleHere Said: |
| i generally hate the emoness of suicide. but i like this one due to the regret and the doubt involved. good rhymes to. good job. |
| On August 29th 2007 NeuroticErin Said: |
| Yah, it flows better now. I like it a lot more. Great job. =)
Love you. |
| On August 27th 2007 monkeydee22 Said: |
| Very good. VERY VERY good. nice rhythem. the words fit together nicely. Excellent peice of work. Keep it up.
~Vampyr~ |
| On August 27th 2007 tswieberg Said: |
| Awesome, awesome poem. |
| On August 27th 2007 demon202 Said: |
| awesome poem i think its the best anyone has told me to read on this site thanks for sharing it |
| On August 26th 2007 LostSoul1121 Said: |
| amazing....i love it. please keep me posted on any new poems. |
| On August 26th 2007 Kragenbring31 Said: |
| wow i love it that like me but i didn't die bridge wasn't hi enough |
| On August 26th 2007 poet77 Said: |
| too true too true and very moving
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| On August 26th 2007 gorjuzkisses Said: |
| wow thats great really well done
plz come and read my poems i weould love to hear what you think!!! |
| On August 26th 2007 invadernic Said: |
| awwww i love this poem its so sad but i still love it |
| On August 26th 2007 CodyLovesKim12 Said: |
| Hey,
This poem is Deep;;,,, I really like it, so talented keep it up!!
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| On August 26th 2007 u2s3xiibabi3 Said: |
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| i lik disxz shyt!!!! its mah ho0ot....u shud write priffesionally!!! deadass
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| On August 25th 2007 California1516 Said: |
| omg that was so sad:( *sniffles* great writing tho..i like it alot |
| On August 25th 2007 nathan5391 Said: |
| hey, thats kinda like my new poem. i like it. great minds think alike ;) |
| On August 25th 2007 singershaw1239 Said: |
| That is really good. Very sad. But good. comment on some of my poems! check out falling in love. |
| On August 25th 2007 emily28793 Said: |
| omg dat poem is just well WOW! lols |
| On August 24th 2007 blutess Said: |
| really good. sometimes it dont hit the person till its 2 late. letting the past and things that get n the way make a decision that should never have a chance 2 pop its ugly head. if u dont mind, i'd like 2 know what u think of my new poem, wake-up call.' thankz. And a strangers stare. thankz. |
| On August 24th 2007 j2asterisk Said: |
| you probably hear this a lo but i love this a lot |
| On August 24th 2007 stics917 Said: |
| wow dude |
| On August 24th 2007 darkemokid1415 Said: |
| very strong great job loved it |
| On August 24th 2007 earindle Said: |
| Oh that's pretty strong, made me cry, think back of stuff that could've happened, to me ... But anyways, great job, I love it ! |
| On August 24th 2007 unlovableXgirl Said: |
| wow. thats... amazing. |
