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A tad morbid, I must say.Rate this Poem
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Created:
09/02 2007
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444
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Other
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Vampire Boy
Hello there my departed boy
dark eyes set deep into your head
your face is pale and pasty
but surely, you are dead?
Who killed you my deceased boy?
and secretly stole your lively spirit
they drained your body of blood
no heart beat, you can't hear it
My darling undead teenage boy
with canine teeth quite sharp
there are two punctures on your neck
clearly you could rip me apart
You're not such a lifeless boy
pursuing me, your face the least bit coy
you grab me, bite me, drain me dry
now you're refreshed, my vampire boy
©KBH
dark eyes set deep into your head
your face is pale and pasty
but surely, you are dead?
Who killed you my deceased boy?
and secretly stole your lively spirit
they drained your body of blood
no heart beat, you can't hear it
My darling undead teenage boy
with canine teeth quite sharp
there are two punctures on your neck
clearly you could rip me apart
You're not such a lifeless boy
pursuing me, your face the least bit coy
you grab me, bite me, drain me dry
now you're refreshed, my vampire boy
©KBH
Please Login to post comments| On October 17th 2007 lostmybaby15 Said: |
| like wow, this is soo awesome |
| On September 6th 2007 monkeydee22 Said: |
| I liked it, it has a little spice.
~Vampyr~ |
| On September 4th 2007 spaz007 Said: |
| ABSOLUTELY AMAZING. It reminds me of Alexander Sterling. YUMMY! lol Good poem :) |
| On September 4th 2007 jessenajarro93 Said: |
| this is pretty cool story to it but i really like the form and flow plz check mine |
| On September 4th 2007 blackneko Said: |
| wow thats mint well done :) |
| On September 4th 2007 mrskritter Said: |
| wonderful work |
| On September 3rd 2007 NeuroticErin Said: |
| I like it. Like it flowed just right. ^...^ |
| On September 2nd 2007 California1516 Said: |
| dangggggggggg wickedly sweet!! nice job |
| On September 2nd 2007 gorjuzkisses Said: |
| really good well done!!!
it flows really well |
| On September 2nd 2007 VampirateRaven Said: |
| wow!! thats beautiful!! |
| On September 2nd 2007 cloud132475860 Said: |
| This is cool you took something supposedly dark and evil and made it almost like upbeat its cool i like it alot |
| On September 2nd 2007 J3w3llC82890 Said: |
| wow! amazing!
how do you do it?
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| On September 2nd 2007 staziebob Said: |
| wow....thats a good poem |
| On September 2nd 2007 undiie Said: |
| Its good! =] |
| On September 2nd 2007 poet77 Said: |
| nice :) |
| On September 2nd 2007 thekillerheart Said: |
| wow this is something way different then anything i read.. its really good, the descriptions and emotions.. wow .. amazing |
| On September 2nd 2007 Vestque Said: |
| WhOooooOOOO, I loved it. This has to be my favorite poem. I almost want more to this.... lol |
| On September 2nd 2007 alexia66 Said: |
| i like this, good flow to it :P i also like the story behind it . |
| On September 2nd 2007 earindle Said: |
| Oooh really cool, I love the way it's written, keep the good work ! |
| On September 2nd 2007 skslilmama Said: |
| i like this poem its got good imagery. i have visions of a young vampire running through my head. love the description. nice write |
| On September 2nd 2007 Qiqqlez Said: |
| o..datz different..very nicely written. |
| On September 2nd 2007 NaomiElizabeth Said: |
| yay i love vampires and this is a great poem keep up the good work! |
| On September 2nd 2007 tswieberg Said: |
| This is crazy cool. I love this poem!! Wow!!!! |
