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Idk, I tried to write a song. feedback?Rate this Poem
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Addiction to You |
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Ghost In My Mind |
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I'm NOT Sorry |
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Isn't It Funny |
Mind gamer
Mind Gamer
V1
You took too long
I say so long
Cuz you never called back
& I will never forget that
[I won’t forget that...]
Chorus
You, you think you’re so fucking cool
playing games with my mind
But you’re just only a fool
& now I’m glad you’re not mine
[you have no idea...]
V2
You played these games
but now you’re so lame
If only before I thought that
then I wouldn’t have gone back
[never have gone back...]
Chorus
You, you think you’re so fucking cool
playing games with my mind
But you’re just only a fool
& now I’m glad you’re not mine
[you have no idea...]
V3
You played me like a pawn
in your game I was just a pawn
it took so long for me to break through
your charm is gone & now I’m over you
[I’m over you...]
Chorus
You, you think you’re so fucking cool
playing games with my mind
But you’re just only a fool
& now I’m glad you’re not mine
[you have no idea...]
| On August 24th 2007 undiie Said: |
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| Its good! =] |
| On July 28th 2007 NeuroticErin Said: |
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| I like it. |
| On July 25th 2007 hardcorpschick Said: |
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| i like it all except for the 'you have no idea' part in the chorus.... it just doesnt seem to fit to me, but maybe its just me. but i really like the rest. :D |


