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the real feelings

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Created: 06/26 2008
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Category: Pain

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Criminal Unwanted

Take my hand
won't you show me around
give me that companioinship
make me think I'm found

beause all I've felt is alone
alone here no one on my side
Please jest bring me out of this shell
just give me a ride

A ride nowhere
the endless road will lead
lead us to self disvory
to learn what we need

to stay forever
be one with each
You've taught me so much
but there's such more to teach

You just fill me up
Like a drink to a glass
You just complete me
Like earth to grass

and I know it sounds corny
but my thoughts are haunted
It's just something I've craved
but I'm just Criminal Unwanted

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On June 30th 2008 buddadang Said: 
buddadang i think ive. commented this one already..but ill comment again..this one is really good = ]
On June 27th 2008 sweetastic18 Said: 
sweetastic18 omg...i really liked this one...like WOW!!!!!