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Created: 07/24 2008
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Category: Fear

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my prayer to you

My thoughts take over, casting my feelings away

hoping and praying, that these emotions won't stay

Wy can't anyone see how i feel inside

I just want them to realize inside I have died

these tears burn as they streak down my face

my head tells me that my hear is out of place

give me a hint, just give me a sign

let me know when I have crossed the line

teh line of insanity...don't let me go crazy

bring me back to reality..everything is just so hazy

where i can't see..my sight is gone

to the point of hoplessness..I am no longer strong

my breath gets heavy, i feel oh so cold

all i can hope for is..you listen to what I have told

because this is my prayer

from me to you

make everything better

make my dreams come true

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On January 9th 2009 lisaljb Said: 
lisaljb !!!!:)!!!!
On December 28th 2008 Loves2Dance95 Said: 
Loves2Dance95 I like it its nice and I just love good poetry.
On July 26th 2008 sweetastic18 Said: 
sweetastic18 wow....another great one dude =).....its really good and so expressive!
On July 24th 2008 gothicgurl1189 Said: 
gothicgurl1189 Nice.. Mike was right Your a really good poet.. Its amazing
On July 24th 2008 buddadang Said: 
buddadang wow, dude this is like "f;akdjsg;lkasdjf;asf" amazing this is a flipping awesome person like omg chas this is intense i love it
On July 24th 2008 hoskinson1 Said: 
my picture
amazing, words cant describe this poem.
On July 24th 2008 DarkSide1477 Said: 
DarkSide1477 go chas =) awesome poem but i already told ya that like 20 times while u wer writing it lol
On July 24th 2008 yorkiedude27 Said: 
yorkiedude27 gahhh ok so where it says my head tells me one thing my HEART is out of place... that was my favorite line and i screwed it up...soorry D:
On July 24th 2008 yorkiedude27 Said: 
yorkiedude27 please tell me what you think =]