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Created:
07/24 2008
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Fear
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my prayer to you
My thoughts take over, casting my feelings away
hoping and praying, that these emotions won't stay
Wy can't anyone see how i feel inside
I just want them to realize inside I have died
these tears burn as they streak down my face
my head tells me that my hear is out of place
give me a hint, just give me a sign
let me know when I have crossed the line
teh line of insanity...don't let me go crazy
bring me back to reality..everything is just so hazy
where i can't see..my sight is gone
to the point of hoplessness..I am no longer strong
my breath gets heavy, i feel oh so cold
all i can hope for is..you listen to what I have told
because this is my prayer
from me to you
make everything better
make my dreams come true
| On January 9th 2009 lisaljb Said: |
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| !!!!:)!!!! |
| On December 28th 2008 Loves2Dance95 Said: |
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| I like it its nice and I just love good poetry. |
| On July 26th 2008 sweetastic18 Said: |
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| wow....another great one dude =).....its really good and so expressive! |
| On July 24th 2008 gothicgurl1189 Said: |
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| Nice.. Mike was right Your a really good poet.. Its amazing |
| On July 24th 2008 buddadang Said: |
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| wow, dude this is like "f;akdjsg;lkasdjf;asf" amazing this is a flipping awesome person like omg chas this is intense i love it |
| On July 24th 2008 hoskinson1 Said: |
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| amazing, words cant describe this poem. |
| On July 24th 2008 DarkSide1477 Said: |
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| go chas =) awesome poem but i already told ya that like 20 times while u wer writing it lol |
| On July 24th 2008 yorkiedude27 Said: |
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| gahhh
ok so where it says my head tells me one thing my HEART is out of place...
that was my favorite line and i screwed it up...soorry D: |
| On July 24th 2008 yorkiedude27 Said: |
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| please tell me what you think =] |


