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Created:
06/19 2007
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114
Category:
Worry
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your choice
you have a choice not to drink
to stand up to your peers
now listen to me carefully
listen with all ears.
drinking starts a chain of things
that u cannot control
drinking starts a chain of things
that hurts you to your soul.
i tell you this 'cause i myself
has seen what it can do.
thats why i tell you now, again
drinking is up to you.
it turns a mother against her kids
and her late husband's family
they're sent away, the kids i mean
in hope to start a new.
it turns an uncle into a madman
who hurts his wife and child.
it turns a brother into
a person of the wild.
these are things that it can do
i'll tell you that right now.
but it's up to you, only you
and the time to stop is now.
| On July 17th 2007 Dellilah22 Said: |
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| teaches someone to think twice about drinking ! |
| On July 17th 2007 Dellilah22 Said: |
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| teaches someone to think twice about drinking ! |
| On June 20th 2007 fgggfx Said: |
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| omg,this is a amazing poem, i just wanna hang it up on my wall |
| On June 19th 2007 AlexINTJ Said: |
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| Very good and very true--there are no drinkers in my family and I'm lucky for that--but that isn't the case for many. I loved this--it's straight to the point and almost scary in a way. Good job! |
| On June 19th 2007 rockergirl929 Said: |
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| i like this poem.it's really nice.so yea:)luv it!!!!!!! |


