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Created: 06/19 2007
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Category: Worry

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your choice

you have a choice not to drink

to stand up to your peers

now listen to me carefully

listen with all ears.

drinking starts a chain of things

that u cannot control

drinking starts a chain of things

that hurts you to your soul.

i tell you this 'cause i myself

has seen what it can do.

thats why i tell you now, again

drinking is up to you.

it turns a mother against her kids

and her late husband's family

they're sent away, the kids i mean

in hope to start a new.

it turns an uncle into a madman

who hurts his wife and child.

it turns a brother into

a person of the wild.

these are things that it can do

i'll tell you that right now.

but it's up to you, only you

and the time to stop is now.

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On July 17th 2007 Dellilah22 Said: 
Dellilah22 teaches someone to think twice about drinking !
On July 17th 2007 Dellilah22 Said: 
Dellilah22 teaches someone to think twice about drinking !
On June 20th 2007 fgggfx Said: 
fgggfx omg,this is a amazing poem, i just wanna hang it up on my wall
On June 19th 2007 AlexINTJ Said: 
AlexINTJ Very good and very true--there are no drinkers in my family and I'm lucky for that--but that isn't the case for many. I loved this--it's straight to the point and almost scary in a way. Good job!
On June 19th 2007 rockergirl929 Said: 
rockergirl929 i like this poem.it's really nice.so yea:)luv it!!!!!!!