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zodiac3892

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Created: 09/24 2007

Views: 272

Category: Pain

My Poems

+ 18	Untitled
+ 16	untitled
+ 28	Forgotten life
+ 27	a thought
+ 34	Grey
+ 15	Eternity
+ 15	untitled
+ 16	the poet
+ 16	If
+ 18	I miss you
+ 19	Lie to me
+ 18	Broken muse
+ 16	Deanied
+ 18	Looking in your eyes
+ 10	Serum

Smile on your face

Lying on the ground,
Motionless,
Not a single sound,
Can be heard from you.
Death,
Has come to soon,
A last breath,
You have taken.
You were murdered,
For one thing,
Your beauty and grace,
And the smile on your face.

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On September 27th 2007 AlexINTJ Said:


	hmm I love the fact that how you set your work up reflects the tone and point of the poem. It's very symbiotic. I've noticed not many people do that...but it really amplifies your poetry. I will have to agree...it is very beautiful and sad. I was drawn into it.

On September 25th 2007 chicawhatwhatb Said:


	sad, definitly not what i was expecting when i clicked on it, but I like it

On September 24th 2007 Purpledcow Said:


	Beautiful, yet sad.

On September 24th 2007 msdavid1 Said:


	WHEN U R READING THIS DONT STOP OR SOMETHING BAD WILL HAPPEN MY NAME IS SUMMER I AM 15 YEARS OLD i have BLONDE HAIR , SCARS no NOSE OR EARS I AM DEAD IF U DONT COPY THIS JUS LIKE FROM THE RING COPY N POST THIS ON 5 MORE SITES OR I WILL APPEAR ONE CREEPY NIGHT WEN UR NOT ExPECTING IT BY YOUR BED WITH A NIFE AND KILL U THIS IS NO JOKE SUMMET ING GOOD WILL HAPPEN TO U IF YOU POST THIS ON 5 MORE FLASH BOXES

On September 24th 2007 alexia66 Said:


	aww this is good :)

On September 24th 2007 HRHHermione Said:


	Beautiful (in a very sad way)

On September 24th 2007 pru1989 Said:


	oh this brings back so many memories very well discribed

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