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Created: 07/31 06:08 pm

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So this is what I wrote for him. Tell me what you think.

Tell me if I should give him this or not. It might be too much or whatever, but it seems to be the only way i can articulate how I feel. Even though it doesn't even come close to my real feelings for him.

There was this perfect silence when everything was finished. This raw emotion that took away all pretenses. Where eyes met and truth was told, but understanding kept the upper hand. I lost so much heart that day and only when everything was said, did I really look at you. I saw the remaining regret, the lonely living, and the empty entity of the soft spoken. The people who hide beneath their confidence because they don't want others to see the outright insecurities. Maybe it was then that I realized it. It was then that I knew you were my promise. That even if years had left me and I was completely alone, you were the hope that I would hold in my heart. The one thing i remember doing right by. Even if I wasn't it for you. You're the only thing that comes close and someday when I meet someone and I love someone as much as I love you, then I'll know I've found someone special. I'll hope that they will love me too. So thank you for being that for me. Thank you for changing my life.



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At 09:12 pm ThruOnesEyes Said :
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God don't remind me how good she gives head,
everyday I've woken up in bed
I thought of how great it felt
to blow a load all over her tongue extended
& how relieving it felt to make her tits bleed,
& normally I'd be kidding
& say it was just a dream,
but last year wasn't all that long ago, y'know?
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At 06:57 pm putsy Said :
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yeah, either that or suck his dick, both will have a simlar effect.
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At 06:52 pm ThruOnesEyes Said :
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Well, you said it doesn't come close to how yo ureally feel, so it doesn't seem to be it, no.
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In response to ThruOnesEyes At 06:26 pm ViableFate Said :
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so you don't think thats it?
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At 06:24 pm ThruOnesEyes Said :
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But if you're content with what's said, give it to him.
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At 06:24 pm ThruOnesEyes Said :
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"Even though it doesn't even come close to my real feelings for him." Sounds like you haven't even tried writing for weeks, hours, months, & sweated the hard truth to yourself even, if that's the case.

Be as raw & as real to yourself as you feel towards the heart you belong to.
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