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An Unpredictable Love
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I decided to go back to the hospital. That was after all where my body was. Hyden was still sobbing, but slightly. Steve was there. Which was awkward.
“Friggin’ uncle of hers did this! I’m gonna kill that S.O.B!” Steve ranted.
“Dude, don’t EVEN go there! You knew all this time and you did nothing about it. Besides it was Andy Cruz.”
“You would know you-” A news reporter came in. Which was odd because I was now becoming “famous”
“I’m here on the behalf of-“
“I know why you’re here.” Hyden said coolly.
“Well would you mind-”
“Yes you are NOT getting ANY info on her!” Steve then said through his teeth.
Just then Mark came in. What in heck!? Steve and Hyden both glared at him.
“Relax I’m…She’s alive??” He asked in amazement. He walked over to my body and took my hand. I felt it. Weird.
“Hey you’re that dude who frightened Kali that one night!” Hyden recalled.
“Yeah that’s me. I am her…brother.” He replied in a strained way. My physical hand tightened around his. Mark gasped.
“She doesn’t have any siblings so therefore you’re lying.” Steve spat. Hyden clenched his fists. I went over to him and placed my hand on his shoulder. He relaxed.
“She didn’t…doesn’t know about me. My father, our father wanted me to check up on her. Our mother didn’t want me to. That lady that was here is our mother. But she’s a whore so it doesn’t matter.” Mark seemed so sincere when he said that. Maybe him being my brother would work out after all. My physical self smiled. Mark gasped along with Steve. I don’t know why Steve was here. I felt a faint tugging....To be continued
ps Ideas would be nice. Im running dry :(
Comments
| On February 22nd 2008 cheerwine14352 Said: |
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| wow that is great! KMP and if I think of anything I will let you know |
| On February 22nd 2008 Khmerfriendz Said: |
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| woow. i think she should wake up earlier. falls for hyden and she will forgive steve for what he did. mark will get his own house and kali would move in with him! ahah. lol. i dont know eitherxD. |
| On February 22nd 2008 makana96792 Said: |
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| totally awesome, kmp, love ur story |
| On February 22nd 2008 Panda224 Said: |
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| Wow.. That's really good, not very many typos, nice formatting, this could go a ways. :D As for ideas. Email me, I'll see what I can do. |
| On February 21st 2008 Khmerfriendz Said: |
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| ah. love it! keep me posted please! |
| On February 21st 2008 musiclover2050 Said: |
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| kmpp |
| On February 21st 2008 dangg101 Said: |
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| awesome kmp please |
| On February 21st 2008 novastarr23 Said: |
| On February 21st 2008 ReneakaKC Said: |
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| cool story! |
| On February 21st 2008 feather1904 Said: |
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| whoa ur really good! kmp plz! |


