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The Story Still Continuning.

HEY! so..im trying a new story....its about my life...sort of...if there is an incident...like the one occuring...its most likely happened..so yeah. Please leave me comments and rate...this is just the beginingif any of you like it...thanks!
Creative Created on 7-3-09 Views(157) Story Rating G

 

The farthest back I'll let my mind wander at this point, is to that night. The memories I could bring back with the thoughts, just scare me out of my mind, which is why its remaining on the worst that I cann recall at the time. Neither do I remember if this was an earlier, or later, or just the night that haunts my mind, showing me what I would have been ripped from. Its still not clear in my mind how it ever ended.

 

~flash back~

 

She was standing in the hallway, of our trailer. 

It was to me, the best a home could be, even compared to those big fancy, mansions I had seen from time to time, when we would visit my grandparents.

Oh god..did he have to yell so much?  As I watched my fatherscream at my mother, his face turning a bloody red, as the veins popped from this neck.She was crying, andshe was yelling.  I was afraid, afraid of how this fight could end up.

~

To this day, I can't recall what many of their fights were about, my mom, and step dad's. They were always fighting, but the worst of it was..it always turned on my brother and I. Which, turned to the beating, blood, bruises, and new lies we had to make up for school, so nobody would be aware, of the living hell we were made to go through, almost daily.

~

I began worrying, as I watched his face, distort with anger, and hers show signs of fear, pain, anger, and worry for what could happen in a few short hours. Instantly, his hand shot out, smacking her face with such a force it made her fly backwards, hitting the wall, and edge of the wall with her head.

 

 

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On October 28th 2009 DayumItsMikey Said: 
DayumItsMikey Awwwwwwwwww that's sad :(
On July 30th 2009 DarthRavus Said: 
DarthRavus So...thats all real right? I think u said it was about ur childhood.
On July 20th 2009 lisaljb Said: 
lisaljb Interesting
On July 11th 2009 specialk107 Said: 
specialk107 so far so good, i cant wait to read more, and srrs it took so long for me to read it, havent been around lately
On July 7th 2009 suknenesan1 Said: 
suknenesan1 U should continue this story its osm
On July 6th 2009 pianantruth Said: 
pianantruth Love it
On July 4th 2009 FireAngel420 Said: 
FireAngel420 definatly keep going unfortunatly I went through almost the same thing and you are writing it so well...great job
On July 3rd 2009 charon17 Said: 
charon17 Love it continue
On July 3rd 2009 rkscarb2 Said: 
rkscarb2 I like it (: Continue for sure.
On July 3rd 2009 IrePilot Said: 
IrePilot it looks interesting, real. i think u should keep going for a few more chaps at least and see how it goes :)